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2014-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Dear my Teacher Paula, Good day. Today is our last class of this year. I started Power English from last September, and I keep on studying with you until now. Studying English is one of my important goals this year, and I did the best I could. However, I still have a long way to go before I become talkative in English, and I feel that it is very hard to level up. I should insist on studying English next year, but I am worried that it would not go as I hope. Studying foreign language is a long race against time, and I made it as a New Year's resolution. Do you make a New Year's plan? No matter how busy you are, you should enjoy your life and take care of yourself. I hope your purpose will be realized next year, and I will support you in spirit as your student. Enjoy your Season's Greetings and Happy New Year! See you. [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hello my amazing Student [이름]! ^.^

 

A marvelous Tuesday to you! ^^

 

I am so excited.

I can\'t wait to welcome 2015 with a big hug.

Hahaha! ^^

You are right.

Today is our last day of classes this year.

It means that we are having another chapter of our awesome lives.

I am so thankful that I am still your teacher.

Time really flies so fast.

It\'s already three months that we\'ve been learning English together.

Wow ~~~ !!! ^^

Today is our third monthsary.

Hahaha! ^^

Thank you so much for believing in me! ^.^

 

By the way, we are somehow similar with our goals this year.

I also promised myself to study and improve in English.

Same with you, I also have a long way to go before I achieve this objective of mine.

Good luck to the both of us! ^^

Congratulations to you in advance! ^^,

Don\'t worry to much! ^^.

 

Anyway, thanks a lot for your comment! ^^

I also hope the same things for you! ^^,

Enjoy everything that you have! ^^.

See you very soon! ^.^

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

P.S.: My top five New Year\'s resolutions are as follow:

1. Stop being negative.

2. Save money.

3. Continue my Masters.

4. Be healthy.

5. Love more.

 

 

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good day.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Good day!

Today is our last class of this year.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Today is our last class this year.

I started Power English from last September, and I keep on studying with you until now.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I started studying at Power English from last September, and I keep on studying with you until now.

Studying English is one of my important goals this year, and I did the best I could.
>> CORRECT!

However, I still have a long way to go before I become talkative in English, and I feel that it is very hard to level up.
>> CORRECT!

I should insist on studying English next year, but I am worried that it would not go as I hope.
>> CORRECT!

Studying foreign language is a long race against time, and I made it as a New Year\'s resolution.
>> CORRECT!

Do you make a New Year\'s plan?
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Do you make New Year\'s plan?

>> OR: Do you make your New Year\'s plan?

No matter how busy you are, you should enjoy your life and take care of yourself.
>> CORRECT!

I hope your purpose will be realized next year, and I will support you in spirit as your student.
>> CORRECT!

Enjoy your Season\'s Greetings and Happy New Year!
>> CORRECT!

See you.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: See you!

[이름]

>> CORRECT!

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