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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello my amazing Student [이름]! ^.^
A marvelous Tuesday to you! ^^
I am so excited.
I can\'t wait to welcome 2015 with a big hug.
Hahaha! ^^
You are right.
Today is our last day of classes this year.
It means that we are having another chapter of our awesome lives.
I am so thankful that I am still your teacher.
Time really flies so fast.
It\'s already three months that we\'ve been learning English together.
Wow ~~~ !!! ^^
Today is our third monthsary.
Hahaha! ^^
Thank you so much for believing in me! ^.^
By the way, we are somehow similar with our goals this year.
I also promised myself to study and improve in English.
Same with you, I also have a long way to go before I achieve this objective of mine.
Good luck to the both of us! ^^
Congratulations to you in advance! ^^,
Don\'t worry to much! ^^.
Anyway, thanks a lot for your comment! ^^
I also hope the same things for you! ^^,
Enjoy everything that you have! ^^.
See you very soon! ^.^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
P.S.: My top five New Year\'s resolutions are as follow:
1. Stop being negative.
2. Save money.
3. Continue my Masters.
4. Be healthy.
5. Love more.
Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good day.
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>> OR: Good day!
Today is our last class of this year.
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>> OR: Today is our last class this year.
I started Power English from last September, and I keep on studying with you until now.
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>> OR: I started studying at Power English from last September, and I keep on studying with you until now.
Studying English is one of my important goals this year, and I did the best I could.
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However, I still have a long way to go before I become talkative in English, and I feel that it is very hard to level up.
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I should insist on studying English next year, but I am worried that it would not go as I hope.
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Studying foreign language is a long race against time, and I made it as a New Year\'s resolution.
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Do you make a New Year\'s plan?
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>> OR: Do you make New Year\'s plan?
>> OR: Do you make your New Year\'s plan?
No matter how busy you are, you should enjoy your life and take care of yourself.
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I hope your purpose will be realized next year, and I will support you in spirit as your student.
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Enjoy your Season\'s Greetings and Happy New Year!
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See you.
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>> OR: See you!
[이름]
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