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2015-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy New Year! How did you like your holidays? Today is my first working day of this year. I was lazy during my resting time, so it was a little hard to get up at 06:30 AM this morning. I could guess how many emails I have to handle at my work, but there were too much more letters than I thought. I have been shocked, and I was out of mind for a moment. Apparently, I should struggle to clear up belated works this week. My sweet resting time ended, but my life of New Year will be sweeter. I hope you can also greet a brilliant year, and wish you to achieve your success. See you very soon. [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! ^.^ Happy New Year, too! ^^   My holiday was great. Before New Year\'s Eve, I was so busy. I went out with my friends from Monday to Saturday last week. I had a crazy week with them. I didn\'t have enough sleep. Hahaha! ^^ However, I still felt good because of the fantastic time I was with them. I also swam in the pool twice last week. I swam last January 1 and 3. I think I told you that I really love swimming.   Anyway, I\'m sorry to hear that you had a lot of behind jobs. Even though that\'s the case, I know you passionately do your job. The best thing there is you stay very optimistic. Thank you for your hope for me! ^^ I also hope the same for you. In addition, I hope for more things to come for.   That\'s all for today! ^^ See you tomorrow! ^^, Sleep well! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula,>> CORRECT! >> OR: Dear [Name], Happy New Year!>> CORRECT! How did you like your holidays? >> CORRECT! Today is my first working day of this year. >> CORRECT! I was lazy during my resting time, so it was a little hard to get up at 06:30 AM this morning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I was lazy during my resting time, so it was a little hard to get up at 6:30 am. >> OR: I was lazy during my resting time, so it was a little hard to get up at 6:30 in the morning. I could guess how many emails I have to handle at my work, but there were too much more letters than I thought. >> CORRECT! I have been shocked, and I was out of mind for a moment. >> CORRECT! Apparently, I should struggle to clear up belated works this week. >> CORRECT! My sweet resting time ended, but my life of New Year will be sweeter. >> CORRECT! >> OR: My sweet resting time ended, but my life this New Year will be sweeter. >> OR: My sweet resting time ended, but my life this year will be sweeter. I hope you can also greet a brilliant year, and wish you to achieve your success. >> CORRECT! See you very soon.>> CORRECT! >> OR: See you very soon! [이름] >> [이름] (The K in [이름] should be in capital letter.)

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