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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula,
Happy New Year!
How did you like your holidays?
Today is my first working day of this year.
I was lazy during my resting time, so it was a little hard to get up at 06:30 AM this morning.
I could guess how many emails I have to handle at my work, but there were too much more letters than I thought.
I have been shocked, and I was out of mind for a moment.
Apparently, I should struggle to clear up belated works this week.
My sweet resting time ended, but my life of New Year will be sweeter.
I hope you can also greet a brilliant year, and wish you to achieve your success.
See you very soon.
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]! ^.^
Happy New Year, too! ^^
My holiday was great.
Before New Year\'s Eve, I was so busy.
I went out with my friends from Monday to Saturday last week.
I had a crazy week with them.
I didn\'t have enough sleep.
Hahaha! ^^
However, I still felt good because of the fantastic time I was with them.
I also swam in the pool twice last week.
I swam last January 1 and 3.
I think I told you that I really love swimming.
Anyway, I\'m sorry to hear that you had a lot of behind jobs.
Even though that\'s the case, I know you passionately do your job.
The best thing there is you stay very optimistic.
Thank you for your hope for me! ^^
I also hope the same for you.
In addition, I hope for more things to come for.
That\'s all for today! ^^
See you tomorrow! ^^,
Sleep well! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula,>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Dear [Name],
Happy New Year!>> CORRECT!
How did you like your holidays? >> CORRECT!
Today is my first working day of this year. >> CORRECT!
I was lazy during my resting time, so it was a little hard to get up at 06:30 AM this morning. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: I was lazy during my resting time, so it was a little hard to get up at 6:30 am.
>> OR: I was lazy during my resting time, so it was a little hard to get up at 6:30 in the morning.
I could guess how many emails I have to handle at my work, but there were too much more letters than I thought. >> CORRECT!
I have been shocked, and I was out of mind for a moment. >> CORRECT!
Apparently, I should struggle to clear up belated works this week. >> CORRECT!
My sweet resting time ended, but my life of New Year will be sweeter. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: My sweet resting time ended, but my life this New Year will be sweeter.
>> OR: My sweet resting time ended, but my life this year will be sweeter.
I hope you can also greet a brilliant year, and wish you to achieve your success. >> CORRECT!
See you very soon.>> CORRECT!
>> OR: See you very soon!
[이름]
>> [이름] (The K in [이름] should be in capital letter.)
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