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Dear my optimistic Student [이름],

Wow~~~ ! ^^

Thanks for making your homework immediately.

I like your answer to the essay question I gave you.

Hahaha! ^^

You gave me another suggestion.

I will try to do it.

Anyway, it\'s time to prepare to go home.

Thanks for the care.

See you tomorrow! ^^

Take care always! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good evening.
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>> OR: Good evening!

Today\'s essay you gave me is very interesting.
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>> OR: The essay question you have me today is very interesting.

If the DVD player stops working, I will do something as follows instead of watching the movie in my house.
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First, we will go to the movies and see a newly first-run film.
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I think it will be more exciting and dynamic than DVD movie.
>> I think it will be more exciting and dynamic than a DVD movie. (Put A before a singular noun.)

>> OR: I think it will be more exciting and dynamic than DVD movies.

Second, we are going to ride a bicycle that we can use for free at the riverside of the Han River.  
>> Second, we are going to ride a bicycle that we can use for free at the riverside of Han River. (There\'s no need to put THE before HAN RIVER. There should be no article in front of a proper noun.)

>> OR: Second, we are going to ride bicycles that we can use for free at the riverside of Han River.

We can ride the bicycle until we are exhausted.
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>> OR: We can ride the bicycle until we get exhausted.

Finally, we are going to a restaurant where we can get as many refills of foods as we want.
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I am very interested by the thought of that.
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To be honest, these are my normal date with my boyfriend.
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I want to suggest this kind of course for you as a good date. ^^
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Anyway, it is time to go to bed.
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Take care when you go home.
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See you tomorrow.
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[이름]

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