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Dear my Teacher Paula, Good evening. Today's class was very nice, and you gave me lots of advice for my pronunciation. These pronunciations like V, L, and R still are really hard to say, but I will try hard to correct those. Thank you for your comment. ^^ In our class, I have a question as follows. What is different from 'leave work' and 'leave from work'? I am a little confused for that. ^^;; Then, today's homework is also fascinating me. I hand in my homework as follows. ^^ Have a great time for the rest of the day. [이름] *Essay It's me. Some jerk following behind me suddenly drove right into the back of my car, and I might not be able to move away from this scene of the accident. However, you know, the jerk is very handsome, oh, come to mama. HaHaHa I have to fix my makeup. I have got to hang up the phone right now, I will call you back later.

Dear my elegant Student [이름],   Hi there once again! ^^   Thank you also, because I really enjoyed our class today! ^^ It is good that you always listen to me. About my comments, I think there\'s no need for you to say thank you. I am just doing my job as your teacher. But anyway, you are always welcome. Hahaha! ^^   By the way, \'leave work\' and \'leave from work\' are the same. I think \'leave from work\' is better. \'Leave work\' has another meaning. It means \'quit a job\'. I hope my explanation can help remove your confusion.   Anyway, enjoy the rest of your evening with peace! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: I laughed a lot when I read your answer to the essay question I gave you. I love it. However, there are few things you need to consider. Review your composition together with my corrections and suggestions.     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!Good evening. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good evening! Today\'s class was very nice, and you gave me lots of advice for my pronunciation. >> CORRECT! These pronunciations like V, L, and R still are really hard to say, but I will try hard to correct those.>> CORRECT! >> OR: The pronunciations with V, L and R sounds are really hard to say, but I will try hard to correct them. >> OR: The pronunciations with V, L and R sounds are really hard to say, but I will try hard to enunciate them correctly. Thank you for your comment. ^^>> CORRECT! >> OR: Thank you for your comment! In our class, I have a question as follows. >> CORRECT! What is different from \'leave work\' and \'leave from work\'? >> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: What is the difference between \'leave work\' and \'leave from work\'? I am a little confused for that. ^^;;>> CORRECT! >> OR: I am a little confused about that. Then, today\'s homework is also fascinating me. >> CORRECT! I hand in my homework as follows. ^^>> CORRECT! Have a great time for the rest of the day. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Have a great time for the rest of the day! [이름]>> CORRECT! *Essay It\'s me. >> CORRECT! Some jerk following behind me suddenly drove right into the back of my car, and I might not be able to move away from this scene of the accident. >> CORRECT! However, you know, the jerk is very handsome, oh, come to mama. HaHaHa>> CORRECT! >> OR: However, you know, the jerk is very handsome. Oh! Come to mama. Hahaha! I have to fix my makeup. >> I have to fix my make up. (MAKE UP should be two words.) I have got to hang up the phone right now, I will call you back later. >> CORRECT!