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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula,
Good evening.
I enjoyed today's class with your personal story, and I was happy to give you advice in English, even if it was a small advice.
I am telling you once again, that guy is like such a pig.
You don't need to waste your precious time just because of the crazy thing.
Anyway, my attractive teacher, please see today's homework. ^^
Have a good sleep.
See you tomorrow.
*Essay
1. How many handsome guys did you invite to the picnic?
You must make a pair of girl and guy. Hahaha
2. What should I prepare for the picnic?
3. What kind of outing is that? Did you already make a plan in detail?
4. I want you to let me know the name of the people you invited, meeting time, and the location.
It would be better for all of us to set a chatting room in Kakao talk to discuss about our plan.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]! ^.^
Happy Thursday! ^^
We have the same feeling about our discussion yesterday.
I am so grateful that I got some advice from you.
Even though you gave me a small advice, it made me feel so good.
Thanks a lot! ^^
Don\'t worry, because I won\'t waste my time thinking about it.
By the way, you made a well-composed essay.
I give you two thumbs up for it.
Very good! ^^
However, I want you to be more creative in giving your questions next time.
If possible, you can make a story or put more words to come up with a better composition.
Anyway, all in all, you did very well! ^^
Keep it up! ^^,
See you very very soon! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
>> CORRECT!
Good evening.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Good evening!
I enjoyed today\'s class with your personal story, and I was happy to give you advice in English, even if it was a small advice.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I enjoyed today\'s class with your personal story, and I was happy to give you some advice in English, even if it was a small one.
>> OR: I enjoyed today\'s class with your personal story, and I was happy to give you some advice in English, even if it was a short one.
I am telling you once again, that guy is like such a pig.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I am telling you once again, that guy is such a pig.
>> OR: I am telling you once again, that guy is like a pig.
You don\'t need to waste your precious time just because of the crazy thing.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: You don\'t need to waste your precious time just because of that crazy thing.
Anyway, my attractive teacher, please see today\'s homework. ^^
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Have a good sleep.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Have a good sleep!
See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: See you tomorrow!
*Essay
1. How many handsome guys did you invite to the picnic?
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR YOU MAY START LIKE THIS: Before I accept your invitation, I just have some questions for you to answer. First, how many handsome guys did you invite to the picnic?
You must make a pair of girl and guy. Hahaha
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: The number of girls should be equivalent to the number of guys.
2. What should I prepare for the picnic?
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Then, what should I prepare for the picnic?
>> OR: Then, what should I bring for the picnic?
3. What kind of outing is that?
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Another thing, What kind of outing is that?
>> OR: Another thing, What kind of outing is it?
Did you already make a plan in detail?
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
4. I want you to let me know the name of the people you invited, meeting time, and the location.
>> I want you to let me know the names of the people you invited, the meeting time, and the location. (NAME OF PEOPLE should be NAMES OF PEOPLE. Put THE before MEETING TIME since it is a particular idea.)
>> I want you to let me know the names of the people you invited, the meeting time, and the location. (NAME OF PEOPLE should be NAMES OF PEOPLE. Put THE before MEETING TIME since it is a particular idea.)
>> OR: Finally, I want you to let me know the names of the people you invited, the meeting time, and the location.
>> OR: Finally, I want you to tell me the names of the people you invited, the meeting time, and the location.
It would be better for all of us to set a chatting room in Kakao talk to discuss about our plan.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: It would be better for all of us to set a group chat in Kakao talk to discuss about our plan.
>> OR: It would be better for all of us to set a group chat in Kakao talk to discuss about the picnic this coming Saturday.
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