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Dear my Teacher Paula, Good evening. I am a little out of mind because of my work. I don't remember what I said to you during our class. ^^;; I am going to review our class after a while. Have a good time for the rest of the day. See you tomorrow. *Essay If I were given a chance to go abroad, I would go to the Philippines. Every day, I can see you through the webcam, but it would be different with seeing you in person. Moreover, many people said that there in the Philippines is really beautiful. I think there is worth a visit in my life. I hope you will greet me when I come to visit. ^^

Hi there, Charming [이름]! ^.^ Happy Thursday! ^^   OMG~~~! I think you are thinking too much. Please relax.   Anyway, I am giving you 95% for doing your homework. You did an almost perfect writing. Very good! ^^   See you tomorrow! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula,>> CORRECT!Good evening.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Good evening! I am a little out of mind because of my work. >> CORRECT! I don\'t remember what I said to you during our class. ^^;; >> CORRECT! >> OR: I can\'t remember what I said to you during our class. I am going to review our class after a while. >> CORRECT! Have a good time for the rest of the day.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Have a good time for the rest of the night! See you tomorrow. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you tomorrow! *Essay If I were given a chance to go abroad, I would go to the Philippines. >> CORRECT! Every day, I can see you through the webcam, but it would be different with seeing you in person. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Every day, I can see you through a webcam, but it would be different if I see you in person. >> OR: Every day, I can see you through a webcam, but it would be different if I see you face-to-face. Moreover, many people said that there in the Philippines is really beautiful.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Moreover, many people said that your country is really beautiful. >> OR: Moreover, many people said that there are really beautiful places in your country. I think there is worth a visit in my life.>> CORRECT! >> OR: I think it is worth a visit in my life. I hope you will greet me when I come to visit. ^^ >> I hope you will greet me when I go to visit. (Remember the concept, come here and go there.) >> OR: I hope you will greet me when I go there to visit.