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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Bella! I really appreciate your effort towards Studying English. Keep up the good work! Thank you for the compliments. And thank you too for being such a nice student to me...^^
Always take care..
T.Cam
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning!
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>>OR: A pleasant morning!
It is nice talking to you everyday.
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When I talking with you, I can speak English more comfotable.
>>When I’m talking with you, I can speak English more comfortable.
Take care of your health.
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Thank you so much for your help everyday.
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>>OR: I really appreciate your everyday help for me.
So,,Then,,I have question about composition.
>>I have a request about my compositions.
I want composition to more polished and special expression.
>>I want my composition to be more polished and I want you to add special expressions.
Can you please change more polish composition when I write composition or letter for practice,??
>>Can you please check and polish more my compositions?
If it has more difficult a word.It is Okay. Because I will find dictionary and I will practice speak and write.
>>If it has more difficult words, it’s okay because I will find them in the dictionary. In addition, I will also practice speaking and writing.
Thank you for your help in advance.
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See you soon.
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