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2011-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear sir, Good morning. I changed and requested qut of 10 for 10 month frame work order by ERO. However, I cannot change 3000500 vendor. Because there is vendor number in SAP but there is no vendor number in ERO. So, I requesed 3000500 vendor. And Ms. [Name] juyoung from Purchasing department said that she can change vendor number when she make PO #. Would you please approve ERO as soon as possible??? I want to apply from this month. And we waiting for your approval. Thank you for your help.

강사 첨삭

Hello Dear [Name]!

I am glad to be of help to anything. I hope that they will approve the ERO for you.

-T.Camille-

 

Here are some of your corrections:

Dear sir,
>>Correct!
Good morning.
>>Correct!
I changed and requested qut of 10 for 10 month frame work order by ERO.
>>I change and requested a 10-month frame work order by ERO.
However, I cannot change 3000500 vendor. Because there is vendor number in SAP but there is no vendor number in ERO.
>>However, I cannot change the vendor number 3000500 because the number is in SAP and not in ERO.
So, I requesed 3000500 vendor. And Ms. [Name] juyoung from Purchasing department said that she can change vendor number when she make PO #.
>>So I requested for the 3000500 and Ms. [Name] from the purchasing department said that she can change the vendor number if she makes a PO#.
Would you please approve ERO as soon as possible???
>>Would you please approve the ERO as soon as possible?
I want to apply from this month. And we waiting for your approval.
>>I would want to apply this month and I will be waiting for your approval.
Thank you for your help.

>>Correct!

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