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Dear [Name] [이름],

Greethings! ^.^

A marvelous Monday to the both of us! ^^,

I am sorry that I didn\'t check your composition last weekend.

I was so busy taking care of my younger brother\'s baby girl and doing some household chores.

Frankly speaking, I didn\'t have a good weekend.

My weekend was fool of worries.

I worried a lot about my youngest niece.

She was brought to hospital, and she\'s there until now.

Therefore, my worries are not yet finish.

Another thing that keeps me thinking a lot is my mother\'s condition.

She\'s also sick.

She coughs a lot.

She takes some medicine, but I think she\'s not getting well.

I am really sad because of my younger niece and my mother.

I don\'t know what to do now. T.T

Anyway, thanks for making a letter! ^^

It made me divert my thinking somehow! ^^,

See you tomorrow! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
>> CORRECT!

Are you enjoying your weekend?
>> CORRECT!

I am taking a good rest now and recovering from the cold.
>> I am taking a good rest now and recovering from a cold. (When it\'s your first time to introduce something, use the A or AN. )

>> OR: I am taking a good rest now and recovering from my cold.

It is sunny today, but it is too windy, so I am staying at home to avoid making my condition worse.
>> CORRECT!

Unfortunately, there are a lot of house works to do, and no one can help me to do that.
>> Unfortunately, there are a lot of house works to do, and no one can help me to do them. (Since you used WORKS, THAT should be THEM.)

A piled of dirty washing is piled high on the basket, and many of dishes are also piled in the sink.
>> A pile of dirty washing is on the basket, and many dishes are also piled in the sink. (Avoid redundancy.)

>> OR: Dirty washing is piles high on the basket, and many of my dishes are also piled in the sink.

I am lazy to do that, but if I don\'t start doing that, I have no clothes to wear tomorrow, and I can\'t prepare my dinner to eat.
>> I am lazy to do them, but if I don\'t start doing them, I will have no clothes to wear tomorrow, and I can\'t prepare my dinner to eat. (THAT should be THEM. Use WILL to indicate future.)

>> OR: I am lazy to do them, but if I don\'t start doing those chores,  I won\'t have clothes to wear tomorrow, and I can\'t prepare my dinner to eat.

Now, I really want to make a magic and finish what I have to do.
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>> OR: Now, I really want to make a magic and finish the things I have to do.

I have no choice, and I\'ve got to go to start that now. ^^;;
>> CORRECT!

Have a nice time for the rest of the day.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Have a nice time for the rest of your day!

See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: See you tomorrow!

[이름]

>> CORRECT!