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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my cute Teacher Paula,
Good day.
I saw your reply, and I am really sorry to hear that.
You didn't sleep well last night because you had to take care of your niece.
If you don't have enough sleep, it will be not good for your health.
Now, your niece came back home, you can have a good sleep tonight.
I hope you will be able to get a good night's sleep without any interruptions.
See you tomorrow and take care of yourself.
[이름]
*Essay
Yes, I really like walking anywhere.
To lose my weight, I usually go to a school playground, but these days I don't go there because of a cold weather.
As spring comes, I will start jogging again. ^^
I think jogging is really helpful for my health.
If you feel having some problem with your body, I want to suggest a jogging for you.
I assure you that it will make you healthier. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hello there, my sporty Student! ^.^
Happy Wednesday! ^^
It\'s me again! ^^,
Hahaha! ^^.
Do you think I am cute?
I disagree.
Hahaha! ^^
By the way, thank you for the care you are showing! ^^
I had a good sleep last night even thought I slept late because of playing with my younger brother\'s niece.
I still feel a little tires, but I am totally okay. ^^
Anyway, it\'s good that you like walking.
It\'s bad that you don\'t do it nowadays.
Well!
I can\'t really tell you what to do now.
I don\'t do any kinds of exercises.
I think I don\'t have the right to give you an advice related with health.
However, I will try your suggestion.
That\'s all for now! ^^
Enjoy your day with peaceful heart! ^^,
See you later! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
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Good day.
*Essay
>> CORRECT!
>> Good day!
I saw your reply, and I am really sorry to hear that.
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>> CORRECT!
You didn\'t sleep well last night because you had to take care of your niece.
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>> CORRECT!
If you don\'t have enough sleep, it will be not good for your health.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: If you don\'t have enough sleep, it won\'t be good for your health.
>> OR: If you don\'t have enough sleep, it will be bad for your health.
Now, your niece came back home, you can have a good sleep tonight.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
I hope you will be able to get a good night\'s sleep without any interruptions.
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>> CORRECT!
See you tomorrow and take care of yourself.
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>> CORRECT!
[이름]
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>> CORRECT!
*Essay
Yes, I really like walking anywhere.
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>> CORRECT!
To lose my weight, I usually go to a school playground, but these days I don\'t go there because of a cold weather.
>> To lose some weight, I usually go to a school playground, but these days, I don\'t go there because of a cold weather. (If you want to lose weight, it means you want to have zero kilograms. Don\'t forget to put a comma after THESE DAYS.)
>> To lose some weight, I usually go to a school playground, but these days, I don\'t go there because of a cold weather. (If you want to lose weight, it means you want to have zero kilograms. Don\'t forget to put a comma after THESE DAYS.)
As spring comes, I will start jogging again. ^^
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>> CORRECT!
I think jogging is really helpful for my health.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
If you feel having some problem with your body, I want to suggest a jogging for you.
>> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: If you feel having some problem with your body, I want to suggest jogging for you. (There\'s no need to put any articles before an activity.)
>> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: If you feel having some problem with your body, I want to suggest jogging for you. (There\'s no need to put any articles before an activity.)
I assure you that it will make you healthier. ^^
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