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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula,
Happy Friday!
I am supposed to go out with my some of friends tomorrow.
One of my male friends who got married a couple of weeks ago will introduce his wife to me and my friends through tomorrow's meeting.
I am really expecting for meeting them.
How about you?
In your case, I think you should take a good rest during this coming weekend.
I hope you can escape from all of your pains at least this weekend. ^^
Have a relaxed day!
See you soon.
*Essay
I usually watch movies in theaters.
However, if I fail to book a good seat in theaters, I just give up going to the movies.
In my case, I like sitting at the back of the theater to avoid any disturbances by other people.
If someone kicks the back side of my seat during my movie time, I will be unable to enjoy a movie to the fullest.
I wish they would widen a space between seats in order not to make me a picky person anymore about seats. ^^;;
강사 첨삭
Hi there, my dearest Student [이름]! ^.^
T.G.I.F.~~~! ^^
Today is a good day for me.
I am starting to be more positive than the usual.
Oh!
It\'s really great that you are going to have a special gathering meeting with your friends.
Is he your friend who has a very beautiful wife?
I think you showed his and his wife\'s pictures through Skype.
Am I correct?
Anyhow, I am also looking forward for it.
I know you will enjoy your gathering with them.
Well!
In my case, I think you are correct.
I just really need to take some rest this coming weekend.
I need to find peace first before I make some appointments.
By the way, I am giving you a WOW because of your perfect homework.
Your essay is composed of proper used vocabulary words.
The sentences you have in your writing are well-composed.
Your composition today is perfect.
Well done! ^^
Keep it up! ^^,
I\'m really proud of you! ^.^
However, there are few things you need to look into.
Some of your sentences in your letter needs improvement.
Don\'t forget to carefully see them.
Anyway, thank you for making your composition! ^^
I love it! ^^,
That\'s all for now! ^.^
Don\'t forget to enjoy this day.
Have a great weekend! ^^
See you later! ^^,
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
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Happy Friday!
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>> CORRECT!
I am supposed to go out with my some of friends tomorrow.
>> I am supposed to go out with some of my friends tomorrow. (MY, which is a possessive pronoun, always follows NOUN or ADJECTIVE + NOUN.)
>> I am supposed to go out with some of my friends tomorrow. (MY, which is a possessive pronoun, always follows NOUN or ADJECTIVE + NOUN.)
>> OR: I am supposed to go out with my friends tomorrow.
One of my male friends who got married a couple of weeks ago will introduce his wife to me and my friends through tomorrow\'s meeting.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: One of my friends who got married a couple of weeks ago will introduce his wife to me and our friends through tomorrow\'s meeting.
I am really expecting for meeting them.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I am really expecting to meet them.
>> OR: I am really looking forward to meet them.
How about you?
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
In your case, I think you should take a good rest during this coming weekend.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
I hope you can escape from all of your pains at least this weekend. ^^
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Have a relaxed day!
>> Have a relaxing day! (Adjectives ending with ING describes your opinion about something or somebody. While adjectives ending with ED describes your feeling towards something or somebody.)
>> Have a relaxing day! (Adjectives ending with ING describes your opinion about something or somebody. While adjectives ending with ED describes your feeling towards something or somebody.)
See you soon.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: See you soon!
*Essay
I usually watch movies in theaters.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
However, if I fail to book a good seat in theaters, I just give up going to the movies.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
In my case, I like sitting at the back of the theater to avoid any disturbances by other people.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: In my case, I like sitting at the back of the theater to avoid any disturbances from other people.
If someone kicks the back side of my seat during my movie time, I will be unable to enjoy a movie to the fullest.
>> CORRECT!
I wish they would widen a space between seats in order not to make me a picky person anymore about seats. ^^;;
>> CORRECT!
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