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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula,
Good day!
It is been a long time since we studied our book.
I also like learning our book with you. ^^
Anyway, I want to hand in today's composition as follows.
Have a nice evening. ^^
*Essay
In my case, I have some reasons to study English.
First, I need to talk to foreigners at my work.
Before I started Power English, I only contacted them by E-mail.
Whenever I really needed to express my opinion exactly by English, I have felt frustrated.
Now, that kind of feeling seems to be removed a lot. ^^
Second, I really want to go around the world.
In this case, speaking English is an essential condition for communication to each other.
Third, English is a common language in the world.
It will make me confident when I speak that fluently.
That's why I think that I did a right choice.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Outgoing [이름]! ^.^
Good morning and happy Wednesday! ^^
Frankly speaking, sometimes, I feel like I am useless when we just have free talking.
On the other hand, after thinking things over, I realize that speaking freely with you is not useless.
It is because we can know each other well.
I am thankful that you share your whereabouts with me.
Thank you very much for being a very friendly person and student! ^^
Learning and studying English is very important nowadays, especially there in your country.
I use English when I talk to foreigners too.
Just like you.
I also speak English at my two jobs.
When you know other languages, you may feel more confident.
Your self-esteem goes higher.
It\'s nice to hear that your frustration when you speak English is removed.
I am so glad that you know you did the right choice.
Have a fantastic day ahead! ^^
See you later! ^^,
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
>> CORRECT!
Good day!
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
It is been a long time since we studied our book.
>> It has been a long time since we studied our book. (Your sentence is an example of a Present Perfect statement, so you should have the pattern \"HAS/HAVE + PP\".)
>> It has been a long time since we studied our book. (Your sentence is an example of a Present Perfect statement, so you should have the pattern \"HAS/HAVE + PP\".)
I also like learning our book with you. ^^
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Anyway, I want to hand in today\'s composition as follows.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Have a nice evening. ^^
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Have a nice evening.
*Essay
In my case, I have some reasons to study English.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
First, I need to talk to foreigners at my work.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Before I started Power English, I only contacted them by E-mail.
>> Before I started at Power English, I only contacted them by e-mail. (Don\'t forget to use prepositions.)
>> Before I started at Power English, I only contacted them by e-mail. (Don\'t forget to use prepositions.)
>> BETTER: Before I started studying at Power English, I only contacted them by e-mail.
Whenever I really needed to express my opinion exactly by English, I have felt frustrated.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Now, that kind of feeling seems to be removed a lot. ^^
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Second, I really want to go around the world.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
In this case, speaking English is an essential condition for communication to each other.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: In this case, speaking English is essential for communication with other people.
>> OR: In this case, speaking English is an essential thing for communicating with people who don\'t know my language.
Third, English is a common language in the world.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
It will make me confident when I speak that fluently.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
That\'s why I think that I did a right choice.
>> CORRECT!
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