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Dear my Teacher Paula, Good day. Thank you for sharing your personnel story during our class. I am happy to know more about you. As you told me in the last composition's reply, speaking freely with you is not useless for me. I think it is developing my skill of quickness. ^^ Anyway, I hope you can have a sound sleep tonight. See you tomorrow. *Essay Yes, I have, and I am really used to buy used items. Four years ago, I bought a TV and a washing machine. These are not only cheap, there aren't also any defects. Until now, I have been using these appliances without any problems. For after-service of used items, I never worried about what if service center rejects fixing service. These also have the warranty period, and I can get a service on free for one year. If I can move into a good house, I will buy used items without hesitation again.

A thrilling Thursday to you, my talented Student [이름]! ^.^   Thank you also for sharing your personal information to me! ^^ I feel good when you tell me new things about you. You make me know you better.   Thanks for saying that talking freely with me is not useless! ^^, I am worried about it a little. I hope our free talking moments can really help you improve more.   Anyway, that\'s all for now! ^^ See you tomorrow! ^^, Plan well for your rest day! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good day. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good day! >> OR: A good day to you! Thank you for sharing your personnel story during our class.>> CORRECT! I am happy to know more about you. >> CORRECT! As you told me in the last composition\'s reply, speaking freely with you is not useless for me.>> CORRECT! I think it is developing my skill of quickness. ^^ >> CORRECT! Anyway, I hope you can have a sound sleep tonight. >> CORRECT! See you tomorrow. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you tomorrow! *Essay Yes, I have, and I am really used to buy used items. >> CORRECT! Four years ago, I bought a TV and a washing machine. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Four years ago, I bought some appliances which are TV and washing machine. >> OR: Four years ago, I bought some appliances, a TV and a washing machine. These are not only cheap, there aren\'t also any defects.>> CORRECT! >> OR: These are not only cheap. They don\'t have any defects. Until now, I have been using these appliances without any problems. >> CORRECT! For after-service of used items, I never worried about what if service center rejects fixing service. >> For after-service of used items, I never worry about the service center if it rejects fixing service. (Don\'t put a question in an statement. Change the question into a statement form. WORRIED should be WORRIES, because you are saying a fact.) These also have the warranty period, and I can get a service on free for one year. >> These also have a warranty period, and I can get a service for free for one year. (Check the usage of articles and prepositions.) If I can move into a good house, I will buy used items without hesitation again. >> CORRECT!