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Dear my Student [이름],

Greetings! ^.^

Happy week! ^^,

Anyway, I had a great weekend with my family and friends.

Last Friday, after work, I met my friends and other people.

We drank and had fun together.

It was a long night for us.

I got home around 5 in the morning.

My mother didn\'t get angry.

She also wants me to have fun every weekend.

However, she told me to rest.

Unfortunately, I didn\'t rest.

I chose to have a quality time with my family.

I helped me parents prepare for some food for my younger sister\'s boyfriend.

He visited us.

I went out at 7 in the evening last Saturday after having dinner with him.

I met my friend who\'s studying in Manila for fashion.

His name is Oswald.

We had bowling.

He beat me twice.

I was so sad that time, because I lost, but it is okay, because we will have a rematch next month.

Hahaha! ^^

Yesterday, my family and I had general cleaning.

It was special and unusual, because we assembled my father\'s cabinet.

It was so hard.

My father needed to cut some parts of it in order for us to put it\'s case.

It drained my energy.

After the general cleaning, I went out with another friend who is a head teacher of an English academy here in Baguio City.

Her name is Rachel.

We had dinner together.

We ate garlic buttered chicken.

It was so good.

I was so fool that time.

By the way, are you sure you have perfectly recovered from your sty?

I am still worried about you.

I hope that won\'t happen anymore.

I think I over talked through this letter, so that\'s all for now! ^^

See you tomorrow! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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>> OR: Dear Teacher Paula,

How was your weekend?
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In my case, I had a sty in my left eye, and it made me uncomfortable whenever I was blinking.
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Now, I totally recovered from that, I don\' feel uncomfortable any more.
>> Now, I totally recovered from that, I don\'t feel uncomfortable anymore. (ANYMORE and ANY MORE are different. In your sentence, ANYMORE should be used, because it means any longer.)

It was my first eye trouble, and I felt a little worried if it might be getting severe.
>> It was my first eye trouble, and I felt a little worried if it might have been severe. (Review CONDITIONALS.)

I think this kind of disease is really in relation to immunization.
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>> OR: I think this kind of disease is really in relation to immunity.

I should control my mind not to get stressed from my tasks.
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Stress may lead to all kinds of illness.
>> Stress may lead to all kinds of illnesses. [ILLNESS should be in plural form because of the word KINDS.)

You should also take care of your condition all the time.
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See you very soon. ^^
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