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Dear Teacher Paula, Good morning. I enjoyed our free talking time of yesterday, and it was a precious time for me to check my quickness in English. However, I am worried about your sickness again. I really hope you can totally recover from your stomach ache. ^^;; I am not just saying that, you really should become selfish to secure yourself. Anyway, I am expecting for you to regain your health. ^^ See you soon. *Essay Here in Korea, we have a lot of holidays. Among them, let me introduce some of holidays. First, Lunar New Year's day is one of the most important holidays. It is so that we greet and celebrate our New Year. The day is on us soon, and you can also take 3days rest with us next month. ^^ Second, Thanksgiving Day is our secondary holiday. It comes on September 27th, and we can also take 2days holidays. It is so that we appreciate a rich harvest. As an office worker, I am always expecting for the holidays to come very fast.

Dear [Name]. [이름],   Good evening! ^.^   Today is a wonderful day. I went out when the sun still sharing it\'s warmth. I felt like the sun embraced me.   By the way, I also had the same feeling about our class yesterday. I was so satisfied of your speaking. You were so confident while expressing yourself. However, don\'t worry about me. I\'m doing my best to get totally well soon. I am strong. I will recover completely in no time.   Anyway, here in the Philippines, we have a lot of holidays. Maybe, having a lot of holidays in our country is one of the reasons why Filipinos are happy. We consider Solar New Year\'s Day, Labor Day, All Souls\' Day, Christmas Day and Heroes\' day very important events in our nation. As an employee who works hard every day, I\'m also looking after to the holidays to come.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you very soon! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good morning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! I enjoyed our free talking time of yesterday, and it was a precious time for me to check my quickness in English. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I enjoyed our free talking time yesterday, and it was a precious time for me to check my quickness in English. However, I am worried about your sickness again. >> CORRECT! >> OR: However, I am worried about your condition again. I really hope you can totally recover from your stomach ache. ^^;; >> CORRECT! >> OR: I really hope you can totally recover from your stomachache. I am not just saying that, you really should become selfish to secure yourself. >> CORRECT! Anyway, I am expecting for you to regain your health. ^^>> CORRECT! >> OR: Anyway, I am expecting for your fast recovery. >> OR: Anyway, I am hoping for your fast recovery. See you soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you soon!   *Essay Here in Korea, we have a lot of holidays. >> CORRECT! Among them, let me introduce some of holidays. >> Let me introduce some of the holidays. (Don\'t put AMONG THEM if you won\'t mention a holiday yet.) First, Lunar New Year\'s day is one of the most important holidays. >> First, Lunar New Year\'s Day is one of the most important holidays. (The D in DAY should be in big letter, because it is included in the name of a holiday.) >> OR: First, Lunar New Year\'s Day is one of the most important holidays in Korea. >> OR: First, among them is Lunar New Year\'s Day which is one of the most important holidays in my country. >> OR: First, among them is Lunar New Year\'s Day which is one of the most important holidays to Koreans. It is so that we greet and celebrate our New Year. >> CORRECT! The day is on us soon, and you can also take 3days rest with us next month. ^^ >> The day is on us soon, and you can also take 3 days rest with us next month. (It is better to put a space between a number and a word.) >> OR: The day is on us soon, and you can also take three days rest with us next month. Second, Thanksgiving Day is our secondary holiday.>> CORRECT! It comes on September 27th, and we can also take 2days holidays. >> It comes on September 27th, and we can also take 2 days holiday. (It is better to put a space between a number and a word. Remove the S in HOLIDAYS since we are only talking about one holiday which is Thanksgiving Day.) It is so that we appreciate a rich harvest. >> CORRECT! As an office worker, I am always expecting for the holidays to come very fast. >> CORRECT!