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Dear [Name] [이름],

Good evening, too! ^.^

Sorry for replying to your composition just now. T.T

By the way, I am glad that you noticed my good mood yesterday.

I felt that you were in a good mood too.

About the perilla leaves, I will try to buy this weekend.

I want to try it.

I will buy one can. Hahaha! ^^

Anyway, we have similar situation.

I somehow eat slowly also.

I think it is very difficult to change eating speed.

Until now, I am still trying it.

When I\'m with someone, I just try to eat a little not to feel awkward when my companion already finished eating. Hahaha! ^^

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you very soon! ^.^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear Teacher Paula,
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Good evening.
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>> OR: Good evening!

I think you are in a good mood today, I am also happy with that.
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For the bean leaves that we talked in our today\'s class, that is similar with a perilla leaf.
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I think there in the Philippines, you can also find a can of perilla leaf at Korean grocery stores.
>> I think there in the Philippines, you can also find a can of perilla leaves at Korean grocery stores.

I want to recommend that for you when you lose your appetite.
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Anyway, thank you for today\'s class and have a sweet night.
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I usually have a lunch at 12:00PM.
>> I usually have lunch at 12:00 PM. (You shouldn\'t put any articles in front of BREAKFAST, LUNCH and DINNER.)

I go out to have a lunch with our coworkers.
>> I go out to have lunch with our co-workers. (No article before LUNCH.)

>> BETTER: I go out to have lunch with my co-workers.

Our lunch menu always depends on our boss\'s decision.
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I am not satisfied with that, but I can\'t help to accept that.
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Fortunately, my boss doesn\'t like having fast foods for lunch. Hahaha
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However, they eat so fast, I can\'t follow their eating speed.
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When I am still having a lunch, all of our coworkers finished their meal, and they are just sitting and do nothing beside me.
>> When I am still having lunch, all of our coworkers finished their meal, and they are just sitting and doing nothing beside me. (No article before LUNCH. Since you used SITTING, DO should be DOING.)

>> BETTER: When I am still having lunch, all of my coworkers finished their meal, and they are just sitting and doing nothing beside me.

In this case, I feel a little awkward, so I also try to have a meal fast to avoid this situation.^^;;

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