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Dear Teacher Paula, Good morning. Our fantastic weekend comes to us very soon. Do you have any special plan? In my case, I might go to the library with my boyfriend. It is because I am planning to enter for a test to renew my Chinese language license which is named 'HSK'. It is very hard for me to study two languages at the same time, but I can't be lazy for them. Encourage me to do that well. ^^ See you soon. *Essay I use a subway as a means of commute every day. I use the subway line No.9, and it is one of the most crowded lines. To avoid extreme crowd, I start my daily life earlier. Maybe, I should continue to do so unless our office moves to other place. Of course, I've thought about moving closer to work, but because of a monetary problem, I gave up to look for a new place. Notwithstanding, I think that I am lucky there is a subway station near my house.

Dear my Darling [이름],   Good evening! ^.^ A beautiful Thursday to you! ^^   Frankly speaking, I am not sure about my plans on this coming weekend. I planned to jog with a female friend on Saturday afternoon, but I haven\'t contacted her about it. On Sunday, I will just stay at home to have a bonding time with my family.   I am glad that you are diligently studying Chinese language. I know that you can renew your license in relation to the said language. You are not a lazy person. I know you can do it with flying colors! ^^, I have trust in you! ^^   Anyway, see you very soon! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good morning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! Our fantastic weekend comes to us very soon. >> CORRECT! Do you have any special plan?>> Do you have any special plans? (SOME/ANY + UNCOUNTABLE/PLURAL COUNTABLE NOUNS) In my case, I might go to the library with my boyfriend.>> CORRECT! It is because I am planning to enter for a test to renew my Chinese language license which is named \'HSK\'. >> CORRECT! It is very hard for me to study two languages at the same time, but I can\'t be lazy for them. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It is very hard for me to study two languages at the same time, but I mustn\'t be lazy for them. Encourage me to do that well. ^^>> CORRECT! See you soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you soon!   *Essay I use a subway as a means of commute every day. >> I use a subway as a means of transportation every day. (COMMUTE is not the right word to be used in the sentence.) >> OR: I use a subway as a means of transport every day. I use the subway line No.9, and it is one of the most crowded lines. >> I use the subway line no. 9, and it is one of the most crowded lines. (Put  a space between a word and a number.) To avoid extreme crowd, I start my daily life earlier. >> CORRECT! >> OR: To avoid extreme crowd, I start my daily life earlier than other people do. Maybe, I should continue to do so unless our office moves to other place. >> Maybe, I should continue to do so unless our office moves to another place. (OTHER + PLURAL NOUN and ANOTHER + SINGULAR NOUN) Of course, I\'ve thought about moving closer to work, but because of a monetary problem, I gave up to look for a new place. >> CORRECT! Notwithstanding, I think that I am lucky there is a subway station near my house. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Notwithstanding, I think I am lucky that there is a subway station near my house. >> OR: Notwithstanding, I think I am lucky, because there is a subway station near my house.