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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Friday! I am glad that you told me about your plans on this coming weekend even if that is a temporary plan. In my case, I must get back home early from the library to watch a soccer game tomorrow. Our Korean team will play a soccer game with Australian team, and it is a final game of 2015 AFC Asian cup. I am going to cheer for the players to finish. ^^ See you very soon. *Essay I live in a small studio apartment, and the place is not separate. A studio apartment has some advantages as follows. 1. I don't need to warm my house for a long time. I only can turn my gas boiler on for a while, and it makes my place warm very soon. 2. I don't need to make a lot of effort to tidy up my room. It is a very simple process to clean up. 3. It is perfect for me to live alone. A big house is useless for me for now.

Dear my Darling [이름],   Greetings! ^^ A perfect Friday for the both of us and for the people we love! ^^,   I think almost all Koreans are really supportive to all of your athletes. Somehow, patriotism is reflected in that. Filipinos are not like most Koreans. I think I am one of the Filipinos who doesn\'t really care about our nation\'s athletes. I am so sad about it.   By the way, in relation to your composition, I really envy you. You can live alone. Now, I can\'t really do that. Even though I want to be totally independent, I can\'t because I need to help my family. In addition, my parents don\'t want me to live separately with them.   Anyway, I am pleased to read your composition. I like it! ^^ I hope you will like reading my comments about your writing. See you very soon also! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Happy Friday! >> CORRECT! I am glad that you told me about your plans on this coming weekend even if that is a temporary plan. >> CORRECT! In my case, I must get back home early from the library to watch a soccer game tomorrow. >> CORRECT! Our Korean team will play a soccer game with Australian team, and it is a final game of 2015 AFC Asian cup. >> Our Korean team will play a soccer game with Australian team, and it is a final game of 2015 AFC Asian Cup. (C in CUP should be in capital letter since CUP is a part of name of a competition.) I am going to cheer for the players to finish. ^^>> CORRECT! >> OR: I am going to cheer for the players until the end of the game. See you very soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you very soon!   *Essay I live in a small studio apartment, and the place is not separate. >> CORRECT! A studio apartment has some advantages as follows. >> A studio apartment has some advantages as follow. (Use AS FOLLOWS if the idea is singular. Use AS FOLLOW if you have a plural idea. 1. I don\'t need to warm my house for a long time. >> CORRECT! I only can turn my gas boiler on for a while, and it makes my place warm very soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: When I turn my gas boiler on for a while, my place gets warm for a short time. 2. I don\'t need to make a lot of effort to tidy up my room.>> CORRECT! >> OR: I don\'t need to exert a lot of effort to tidy my room up. It is a very simple process to clean up. >> CORRECT! 3. It is perfect for me to live alone. >> CORRECT! A big house is useless for me for now. >> CORRECT!