Composition

Composition Writing: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. I agree with the following statement. School teacher is a job to help students to get knowledge, build an upright character and socialize well with others. But these elements cannot be evaluated simply. So after proper criteria are prepared, there will be different payments to teachers to make them strive for students.

Hello there [이름]! ^^ Thank you for answering the composition topic. ^^ It is well thought-out and the corrections made were to provide the missing prepositions, articles and such. Rephrasing was also done to help with the overall articulateness. Good job [이름]. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I agree with the following statement. School teacher is a job to help students to get knowledge, build an upright character and socialize well with others. But these elements cannot be evaluated simply. So after proper criteria are prepared, there will be different payments to teachers to make them strive for students. >> I agree with the statement that teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. A school teacher\'s job is to help students get knowledge, build an upright character and to socialize well with others. However, these elements cannot be simply evaluated so after a certain criteria has been prepared, there should be different salary grades to teachers to make them strive for their students education.