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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Monday! Did you rest and enjoy well your weekend? Our new week came to us, and I hope both of us can make our days happy. ^^ Last Saturday, our Korean soccer team lost the game by a score of 1 to 2. Our team fought well, but lost in overtime. I felt frustrated with the result. However, I could see that they struggled to do their best, so it made me feel sad and a little bit bitter. That's okay; we could see our team's possibility by this game. I hope our team can get a good record in the 2018 Russia World Cup. Anyway, let's try to escape from Monday sickness and cheer up. ^^ See you very soon.

Dear my Darling [이름],   Good Monday evening! ^.^   I am really glad that you stayed positive for the past situation of Korea Soccer Team. Your national soccer team really needs support from you and other Koreans. Staying positive is a good way of sympathizing with them.   By the way, I can feel that in the 2018 Russia World Cup, your team will have a good stand there. Just have faith! ^^   Anyway, sleep tight! ^^ See you tomorrow! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Happy Monday!>> CORRECT! Did you rest and enjoy well your weekend? >> Did you rest and enjoy well on your weekend? (You forgot to put a preposition before YOUR WEEKEND.) >> OR: Did you rest and enjoy well during your weekend? >> OR: Did you rest and enjoy well last weekend? Our new week came to us, and I hope both of us can make our days happy. ^^>> CORRECT! >> OR: Our new month came to us, and I hope both of us can make our days happy. Last Saturday, our Korean soccer team lost the game by a score of 1 to 2. >> CORRECT! Our team fought well, but lost in overtime. >> Our team fought well, but lost on overtime. (Use ON before OVERTIME when it\'s needed.) >> OR: Our team fought well, but lost on the overtime game. I felt frustrated with the result. >> CORRECT! However, I could see that they struggled to do their best, so it made me feel sad and a little bit bitter. >> CORRECT! That\'s okay; we could see our team\'s possibility by this game. >> That\'s okay. We could see our team\'s possibility by this game. (Be careful of the punctuation marks you use.) >> OR: That\'s okay. We could see our team\'s potential by this game. I hope our team can get a good record in the 2018 Russia World Cup. >> CORRECT! Anyway, let\'s try to escape from Monday sickness and cheer up. ^^>> CORRECT! See you very soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you very soon!