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Dear my smart Student [이름],

Good evening! ^.^

I am so glad that you introduced your educational system in your country.

You explained it well.

However, there is a part there that I didn\'t really understand.

Is the maximum of taking the university entrance examination for one person is thrice?

Do you mean that 3rd year high school students can only take that kind of exam every November?

Would you please clarify this matter?

Thank you very much! ^^

Anyway, enjoy a glorious weekend! ^^

See you on Monday! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Happy Friday!
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In my today\'s composition, I want to explain more about our system of university entrance.
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>> BETTER: In my today\'s composition, I want to explain more about out university entrance system.

I think I didn\'t express well about that in our last class, so I want to make it clear not to make you confused.
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First of all, here in Korea, there are three separations in our course of study.
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>> OR: First of all, here in Korea, there are three stages in our educational system.

These are like \'elementary school 6years, middle school 3years and high school 3years\'.
>> These are elementary school (6 years), middle school (3 years) and high school (3 years). (It is better to separate the years from the different educational levels.)

>> OR: These are elementary, middle and high school levels. Elementary school consists of 6 years. Middle school consists of 3 years. High school consists of 3 years.

To get into a university, we have to take a university entrance examination, and we can take it in November of high school 3years.
>> To get into a university, we have to take a university entrance examination, and we can take it in November when we are in high school for three times. (I don\'t really know what you mean at the last part of your sentence.)

>> OR: To get into a university, we have to take a university entrance examination, and we can take it every November if and only if we are in 3rd year high school.

After then, examinees can choose some of universities which they want to enter according to their records.
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If those universities don\'t accept the examinees, it means that they failed to enter the university.
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In this case, they can try to take an examination again next year, if they want.
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Because of this, many students really put their time into getting a good university after graduating high school.

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