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Dear [Name] [이름],

Hi there! ^^

Happy Tuesday! ^^

First of all, I want to know the reason why you put our class on hold today.

I am not feeling bad.

I am just curious.

Ohhh! I just feel a little sad, because I didn\'t hear your voice. T.T

Anyway, as a hiker, I totally understand your point in your composition.

When you see a wonderful view after hiking, that feels rewarding.

It will make you go to mountains again and again.

This coming weekend, I will go hiking.

Hahaha! ^^

I can\'t wait to have a lot of sweat again and be rewarded by seeing the beautiful creations of God. ^^

That\'s all for now! ^^

Have a peaceful sleep later! ^^,

See you tomorrow! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good day.
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>> OR: Good day!

My most memorable travel was that I went to Dugyu Mountain with my boyfriend in the middle of winter two years ago.
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>> OR: My most memorable travel was that I went to Dugyu Mountain with my boyfriend

On the first day, I rode a snow board all day, and the next day, it made me ache all over.
>> On the first day, I rode a snowboard all day, and on the next day, it gave me ache all over my body. (SNOWBOARD is only one word. There should be ON before THE NEXT DAY. What is all over? You need to complete your statement.)

>> OR: On the first day, I had snowboarding all day, and on the next day, it gave me ache all over my body.

Our muscle pains were so serious, that we were agonizing over whether to go Dugyu Mountain or not, but our final decision was still to go hiking there.
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Looking back, I might have been regretful if I hadn\'t gone there.
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It is because the scenery of snowy field and trees really fascinated us, and that made us not to be able to take our eyes off.
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>> OR: It is because the scenery of snowy field and trees really fascinated us, and that made us not to take our eyes off.

What a heavenly view!
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I don\'t forget the memories, so I am going to go there this month again.
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>> OR: I can\'t forget the memories, so I am going there this month again.

I already booked a cottage in the mountain, and I finished preparing all of equipment keeping our safety.
>> I already booked a cottage in the mountain, and I finished preparing all of the equipment keeping our safety. (PATTERN: all of the + noun OR all + noun)

Even if there is no water to wash and no comfortable place to stay, but I can endure that kind of trivial bad conditions as long as I can see the wonderful view .

>> Even if there is no water to wash and no comfortable place to stay, I can still endure that kind of trivial bad conditions as long as I can see the wonderful view. (Don\'t put a space before a dot.)

>> OR: Even if there is no water to wash and no comfortable place to stay, I will still be able to endure that kind of trivial bad conditions as long as I can see the wonderful view.