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Dear [Name] [이름],

Hi there! ^,^

Happy Wednesday evening! ^.^

Thank you for answering my question about your absence yesterday! ^^

Frankly speaking, I was so worried because of you being absent.

I thought the reason of your absence is serious.

Well!

It\'s positively serious.

I am really happy for your boyfriend.

By the way, please give him my congratulations! ^^

Anyway, about my weekend plan, it was canceled just this afternoon.

My friend who invited me to go hiking and will celebrate her birthday on Saturday will have an affair on that day.

Her boss assigned her to organize a voluntary service.

I was really disappointed the time when I heard the bad news.

Therefore, instead of hiking, we will just have tree top adventure.

We will eat seafood after that activity.

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you tomorrow! ^^,

Enjoy reading! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear [Name],
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Good day!
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I checked your reply, and I felt sorry for you because of my absence of yesterday.
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>> OR: I checked your reply, and I felt sorry for you because of my absence yesterday.

>> OR: I checked your reply, and I felt sorry for being absent yesterday.

I had a personal reason, so I couldn\'t get a class. ^^;
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>> OR: I ha d a personal reason, so I couldn\'t take yesterday\'s class.

I will tell you the reason in our today\'s class.
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>> OR: I will tell you the reason in our class today.

Anyway, I am happy to hear that you also will go hiking this coming weekend, and we are having a same plan.
>> Anyway, I am happy to hear that you also will go hiking this coming weekend, and we are having the same plan. (Use THE not A before SAME PLAN, because you are talking about a particular thing.)

>> OR: Anyway, I am happy to hear that you will also go hiking this coming weekend, and we are having the same plan.

I am also going to the mountain which is named Bukhan Mountain in Seoul this Saturday.
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Here in Korea, there is a saying that people who like going hiking are all kind and generous.
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It means that both of us are like that. Hahaha!
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When you go hiking, you also should prepare some equipment which can protect you.
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It is like sticks and a wind jacket.
>> They are like sticks and wind jacket. (STICKS and WIND JACKET are two things, so you should write THEY ARE not IT IS.)

The sticks will keep you not to twist your ankle easily when you are on your way down the mountain, and the wind jacket will fence you from a bitter wind at the top of the mountain.
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Needless to say, taking delicious and high calories foods is essential for you. ^^
>> Needless to say, taking delicious and high calorie foods is essential for you. (When there is another noun after HIGH CALORIE, HIGH CALORIE serves as an adjective. You can\'t have a plural form of an adjective.)

Good luck to both of us. ^^
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See you soon.

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>> OR: See you soon!