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2015-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Thursday! I am sorry to hear that you can't go hiking this coming weekend. How could he take her precious time? Your friend's boss is really unfair for her. I guess the mountain you planned to go is looking forward to you coming. By the way, what is the meaning of 'tree top adventure'? I don't know what that is, but somehow it seems like an exciting activity. Would you please explain that for me? See you soon. *Essay This year, I am planning to improve my Chinese and English skill. As you know, foreign language is easy for us to forget if we don't practice what we have learned frequently. Even if I use Chinese language every day, but the words that I am using at my work have a limitation. I only use some words in relation to my business, so I think I really need to train myself not to forget to speak Chinese of daily conversation. Studying English is also one of the most important things to do this year. I should not be lazy.

강사 첨삭

Dear my Lovely Student [이름],

 

A dedicated day to both of us! ^.^

Happy Thursday, too! ^^

Thanks for the greeting! ^^,

 

To start, I would like to say don\'t feel sorry about the cancellation of my Saturday appointment.

Every thing is good.

We already made a back up plan for that.

You already know it.

We will have \'tree top adventure\' and seafood eating.

Hahaha! ^^

 

\'Tree top adventure\' is an activity that we do on top of trees like canopy ride, superman zip-line, tree drop and silver surfer.

 

That\'s all for now! ^^

Enjoy reading! ^^,

See you tomorrow! ^^.

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

Dear my Teacher Paula,
>> CORRECT!

Happy Thursday!
>> CORRECT!

I am sorry to hear that you can\'t go hiking this coming weekend.
>> CORRECT!

How could he take her precious time?
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: How could she take her precious time? (The boss is a woman.)

Your friend\'s boss is really unfair for her.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Your friend\'s boss is really unfair to her. (We usually use FOR if that subject is considered as a first person.)

I guess the mountain you planned to go is looking forward to you coming.
>> I guess the mountain you planned to go is looking forward to you to go there. (Check the proper usage of prepositions.)

>> OR: I guess the mountain you planned to go is looking forward for you to go there.

By the way, what is the meaning of \'tree top adventure\'?
>> CORRECT!

I don\'t know what that is, but somehow it seems like an exciting activity.
>> CORRECT!

Would you please explain that for me?
>> CORRECT!

See you soon.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: See you soon!

 

*Essay

This year, I am planning to improve my Chinese and English skill.
>> CORRECT!

As you know, foreign language is easy for us to forget if we don\'t practice what we have learned frequently.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: As you know, foreign languages is easy for us to forget if we don\'t practice the things we have learned frequently.

Even if I use Chinese language every day, but the words that I am using at my work have a limitation.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Even if I use Chinese language every day, the words that I use at my work still have limitation.

I only use some words in relation to my business, so I think I really need to train myself not to forget to speak Chinese of daily conversation.
>> CORRECT!

Studying English is also one of the most important things to do this year.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Studying English is also one of the most important things I want to do this year.

I should not be lazy.

>> CORRECT!

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