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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear my Lovely Student [이름],
A dedicated day to both of us! ^.^
Happy Thursday, too! ^^
Thanks for the greeting! ^^,
To start, I would like to say don\'t feel sorry about the cancellation of my Saturday appointment.
Every thing is good.
We already made a back up plan for that.
You already know it.
We will have \'tree top adventure\' and seafood eating.
Hahaha! ^^
\'Tree top adventure\' is an activity that we do on top of trees like canopy ride, superman zip-line, tree drop and silver surfer.
That\'s all for now! ^^
Enjoy reading! ^^,
See you tomorrow! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Happy Thursday!
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I am sorry to hear that you can\'t go hiking this coming weekend.
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How could he take her precious time?
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>> OR: How could she take her precious time? (The boss is a woman.)
Your friend\'s boss is really unfair for her.
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>> OR: Your friend\'s boss is really unfair to her. (We usually use FOR if that subject is considered as a first person.)
I guess the mountain you planned to go is looking forward to you coming.
>> I guess the mountain you planned to go is looking forward to you to go there. (Check the proper usage of prepositions.)
>> OR: I guess the mountain you planned to go is looking forward for you to go there.
By the way, what is the meaning of \'tree top adventure\'?
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I don\'t know what that is, but somehow it seems like an exciting activity.
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Would you please explain that for me?
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See you soon.
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>> OR: See you soon!
*Essay
This year, I am planning to improve my Chinese and English skill.
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As you know, foreign language is easy for us to forget if we don\'t practice what we have learned frequently.
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>> OR: As you know, foreign languages is easy for us to forget if we don\'t practice the things we have learned frequently.
Even if I use Chinese language every day, but the words that I am using at my work have a limitation.
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>> OR: Even if I use Chinese language every day, the words that I use at my work still have limitation.
I only use some words in relation to my business, so I think I really need to train myself not to forget to speak Chinese of daily conversation.
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Studying English is also one of the most important things to do this year.
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>> OR: Studying English is also one of the most important things I want to do this year.
I should not be lazy.
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