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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Friday! Thanks for your kind explanation against my curiosity. Today, I still have a question to ask you. We talked about pocket ball and billiards in our last class, but you mentioned the billiards as Korean billiards. I am a little curious about why you use the word ‘Korean’ to express that word. Don't you play that in the Philippines? I just forgot to ask you that question yesterday. ^^;; Anyway, you already made a backup plan, and it looks really amusing. Enjoy that to the fullest. See you very soon.^^ *Essay From being a working woman, I still went to work, and I am now in the office. My daily schedule is that I have to work very hard until 6:00 PM, and then, I am going to go home to get an English class. After finishing that, I am going to see my male friends. One of my male friends is in trouble these days, so he wants to seek our advices. Well, I should be a good counselor this evening.

Dear [Name] [이름],   A beautiful Friday to you! ^.^   First, I would like to say sorry about the confusion I made yesterday about pocket ball and billiards. Let me somehow make it clear. ^^   There are two kinds of billiards that I know or have knowledge about. First is the Pocket Ball. The other is the Korean Billiards. Pocket Ball is a type of billiards that there are six pockets under the table that is used in this kind of game. Korean Billiards is a kind of billiard game where the used table doesn\'t have any pockets. I hope I can satisfy your curiosity and end your confusion. ^^   Anyway, enjoy your weekend plans to the fullest, especially for tomorrow! ^^ Happy Valentine\'s Day! ^^, See you on Monday! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: I think you need to check the essay question that you answered. I think you didn\'t really answer the question.     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Happy Friday!>> CORRECT! Thanks for your kind explanation against my curiosity. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Thanks for your kind explanation about my curiosity. Today, I still have a question to ask you. >> CORRECT! We talked about pocket ball and billiards in our last class, but you mentioned the billiards as Korean billiards. >> CORRECT! I am a little curious about why you use the word ‘Korean’ to express that word. >> CORRECT! Don\'t you play that in the Philippines? >> CORRECT! I just forgot to ask you that question yesterday. ^^;; >> CORRECT! Anyway, you already made a backup plan, and it looks really amusing. >> CORRECT! Enjoy that to the fullest. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Enjoy that to the fullest! See you very soon.^^>> CORRECT! >> OR: See you very soon! *Essay From being a working woman, I still went to work, and I am now in the office. >> Being a working woman, I still go to work, and I am now in the office. (FROM BEING A WORKING WOMAN means you don\'t work now.) My daily schedule is that I have to work very hard until 6:00 PM, and then, I am going to go home to get an English class. >> CORRECT! >> OR: My daily schedule is that I work very hard from 8:00 AM until 6:00 PM, and then, I go home to get English classes. After finishing that, I am going to see my male friends. >> CORRECT! >> OR: After finishing that, I go to see my male friends. One of my male friends is in trouble these days, so he wants to seek our advices. >> One of my male friends is in trouble these days, so he wants to seek some advice from me and our friends. (ADVICE is an uncountable noun, so it doesn\'t have a plural form.) >> OR: One of my male friends is in trouble these days, so he wants to seek some pieces of advice from me and our friends. Well, I should be a good counselor this evening. >> CORRECT!