Composition

Dear [Name]. [이름],

Happy Monday! ^.^

Though our \'tree top adventure\' and \'seafood eating\' were canceled, everything was still fine last Saturday. ^^

I had some cake and pizza with my family.

Last Sunday, it was really a strange day because my friends and I went to a birthday party and a funeral.

We went to our high school friend\'s son\'s first birthday celebration.

It was great that time.

We ate a lot.

We laughed a lot too.

After the party, we went to the funeral.

The feeling there was so down.

I didn\'t know what to feel that time really.

I felt a little ashamed, guilty and other feeling that I couldn\'t explain that time.

I wanted to hug my friend, but I couldn\'t.

I don\'t want to cry that time.

I wanted to be strong for her.

Ohhh~~~

That\'s all for now!

See you!

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good morning!
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How was your weekend?
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Did you enjoy your \'tree top adventure\' and seafood eating to the fullest?
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As I already said to you before, I went to Bukhan Mountain with my boyfriend last Saturday.
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>> OR: As I already told you before, I went to Bukhan Mountain with my boyfriend last Saturday.

The mountain is 836 meters high, and we chose a short and steep way.
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It took two and a half hours to reach the top, and the weather was so bitterly cold there.
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>> OR: It took us two and a half hours to reach the top, and the weather was so bitterly cold there.

I forgot to take a woolly hat, so I had almost been frozen.
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Even if I couldn\'t see a wide view because of the foggy conditions, but the extreme hiking made me feel thrilled.
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>> OR: Even if I couldn\'t see a wide view because of the foggy condition, but the extreme hiking made me feel thrilled.

Of course, I couldn\'t forget the taste of Ramyon and fried tofu sushi that I made.
>> Of course, I couldn\'t forget the taste of Ramyun and Fried Tofu Sushi that I made. (The correct spelling of RAMYON is RAMYUN. When you introduce a name of a dish, it is better to make the first letters of the words in big letters.

What a heavenly taste!
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When I was on my way down the mountain, it took 2hours.
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>> OR: When we were on our way down the mountain, it took us 2 hours.

I considered it as rehearse for climbing the Dukyu Mountain.
>> I consider it as a rehearsal for climbing Dukyu Mountain. (REHEARSE is a verb, so you should use REHEARSAL instead.)

I have 3 days before setting off for there. 
>> I have 3 days before setting off there. (There should be no preposition before THERE.)

I really should prepare carefully not to suffer from the cold. ^^
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See you very soon.

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>> OR: See you very soon!