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Dear Teacher Paula, Happy Tuesday! Needless to say, you might be walking on air now, am I right? ^^ My boyfriend packed up and went to work this morning before going to Busan, and both of us will meet at Muju City the day after tomorrow. Many of my friends said, 'Why do you have that kind of adventure during a fantastic holiday? Just relax at home!' I think all of my friends became a mother, and they might be starting to seek a sense of comfort. Of course, staying at home is a good resting way, especially in this crowded period. However, I think taking an adventure is also a good experience for us. As we get older, we can't do that because of weakness in our body even if we really want to do that. Therefore, we really should take advantage of our youth and strength. Do you also have a same thinking with that? I know that you are an active person, so I believe that you will definitely like that. Hahaha! Anyway, today is our last class of this week, and let's make a good class soon. See you very soon!

Dear [이름],   Here in the Philippines, more and more people go for an adventure on holidays. I think they have the same thinking that you have. I am also like them. However, for this coming long vacation for us, I will just stay home. I will go out when my friends ask me to go out. Hahaha! ^^   That\'s all for now! ^^ Sorry for the short reply! T.T I am still on air. T.T   Anyway, I will miss you! T.T See you on Monday! Happy Seollal! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Happy Tuesday!>> CORRECT! Needless to say, you might be walking on air now, am I right? ^^>> CORRECT! My boyfriend packed up and went to work this morning before going to Busan, and both of us will meet at Muju City the day after tomorrow. >> CORRECT! Many of my friends said, \'Why do you have that kind of adventure during a fantastic holiday? Just relax at home!\' >> CORRECT! I think all of my friends became a mother, and they might be starting to seek a sense of comfort. >> I think all of my friends became mothers, and they might be starting to seek a sense of comfort. (Since you used FRIENDS, you should use MOTHERS not MOTHER.) Of course, staying at home is a good resting way, especially in this crowded period. >> CORRECT! However, I think taking an adventure is also a good experience for us. >> CORRECT! As we get older, we can\'t do that because of weakness in our body even if we really want to do that. >> CORRECT! >> OR: As we get older, we can\'t do that because of lack of physical strength even if we really want to do that. Therefore, we really should take advantage of our youth and strength. >> CORRECT! Do you also have a same thinking with that? >> Do you also have the same thinking with that? (PATTERN: THE SAME) I know that you are an active person, so I believe that you will definitely like that. >> CORRECT! Hahaha!>> CORRECT! Anyway, today is our last class of this week, and let\'s make a good class soon.>> CORRECT! See you very soon! >> CORRECT!