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2011-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name].Camille, Good afternoon! It's a beautiful Friday! I received E-mail from intercompany as below "NOTICE : The information contained in this e-mail is confidential or may otherwise be legally privileged. It is intended for the named recipient only.If you have received it in error, please notify us immediately by reply or by calling the telephone number above and delete this message and all its attachments.Please note that any unauthorized review, copying, disclosing or otherwise making use of the information is strictly prohibited. Thank you." I don't know can I use attached invoice or not. Ms.Camille, Please give me a answer. Thank you for your help.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear Bella,

Thank you for your trust and for this composition that you made for me. I think you just need to disregard this email it might be a spam message. This warning is commonly attached to emails that are privately sent or might be a spam. Do not give importance to this letter if it is not addressed directly to you.

-T.Camille-

Dear [Name]. [Name],
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Good afternoon!
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It's a beautiful Friday!
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I received E-mail from intercompany as below
? >> I received an E-mail from inter-company as seen below:
"NOTICE :?lt;/span>

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The information contained in this e-mail is confidential or may otherwise be legally privileged.

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It is intended for the named recipient only.

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If you have received it in error, please notify us immediately by reply or by calling the telephone number above and delete this message and all its attachments.

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Please note that any unauthorized review, copying, disclosing or otherwise making use of the information is strictly prohibited.?lt;/span>

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Thank you."

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I don't know can I use attached invoice or not.

>> I don't know if I can use the attached invoice or not.
Ms.Camille, Please give me a answer.

>> Ms.Camille, Please give me an answer.
Thank you for your help.

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