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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear Bella,
Thank you for your trust and for this composition that you made for me. I think you just need to disregard this email it might be a spam message. This warning is commonly attached to emails that are privately sent or might be a spam. Do not give importance to this letter if it is not addressed directly to you.
-T.Camille-
Dear [Name]. [Name],
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Good afternoon!
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It's a beautiful Friday!
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I received E-mail from intercompany as below
? >> I received an E-mail from inter-company as seen below:
"NOTICE :?lt;/span>
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The information contained in this e-mail is confidential or may otherwise be legally privileged.
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It is intended for the named recipient only.
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If you have received it in error, please notify us immediately by reply or by calling the telephone number above and delete this message and all its attachments.
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Please note that any unauthorized review, copying, disclosing or otherwise making use of the information is strictly prohibited.?lt;/span>
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Thank you."
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I don't know can I use attached invoice or not.
>> I don't know if I can use the attached invoice or not.
Ms.Camille, Please give me a answer.
>> Ms.Camille, Please give me an answer.
Thank you for your help.
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