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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula,
Long time no see!
It was really good to see you in our yesterday's class.
Our long holiday has finished, and I felt a little sad. ㅠㅠ
Fortunately, our Chinese coworkers don't start work yet, so I can have my own time in my office.
Taking advantage of this free time, I am going to set a plan of next month.
Of course, I need to keep studying English very hard with you.
Even though I did not totally escape from long holiday's feeling, but I have to try to remind myself what I should do.
Maybe, it will take a while to return to my previous life pattern.
Just give it a try!
I guess you are also having the same feeling with me, but I believe you can recover from that better than I do. ^^
See you very soon.
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name] [이름],
Well! ^^
A glorious afternoon once again! ^.^
Hahaha! ^^
Frankly speaking, I was so overwhelmed because of the presence of my students yesterday, including you.
I forgot what happened to my classes when I got home.
Because of you, I somehow remembered some of the things I had discussed with my them and with you.
You are right!
It\'s been a long time not seeing each other and not talking! ^^
I missed you a lot.
I also envied you a lot, because I know that you went hiking.
Anyway, that is a past story.
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See you very very very soon! ^^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
>> CORRECT!
Long time no see!
>> CORRECT!
Long time no see!
>> CORRECT!
It was really good to see you in our yesterday\'s class.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Our long holiday has finished, and I felt a little sad. ㅠㅠ
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Fortunately, our Chinese coworkers don\'t start work yet, so I can have my own time in my office.
>> Fortunately, our Chinese coworkers haven\'t started working yet, so I can have my own time in my office. (Since you are connecting the past to the present, it is better to make our sentence in Future Present form.)
>> Fortunately, our Chinese coworkers haven\'t started working yet, so I can have my own time in my office. (Since you are connecting the past to the present, it is better to make our sentence in Future Present form.)
Taking advantage of this free time, I am going to set a plan of next month.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Taking advantage of this free time, I am going to set a plan for next month.
Of course, I need to keep studying English very hard with you.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Even though I did not totally escape from long holiday\'s feeling, but I have to try to remind myself what I should do.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Maybe, it will take a while to return to my previous life pattern.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Just give it a try!
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I will just give it a try!
I guess you are also having the same feeling with me, but I believe you can recover from that better than I do. ^^
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
See you very soon.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: See you very soon!
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