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Dear [Name] [이름],

A terrific Wednesday evening to you! ^.^

I feel a little sorry about your feeling towards the long holidays of your Chinese co-workers.

Well!

That\'s normal.

If I were you, I would feel the same.

However, you need to stay focused and positive in line with your work.

By the way, thank you for answering the essay question I gave yesterday! ^^

I am really glad to check it.

I gained a lot of information by reading your homework.

Thank you very much! ^^,

Anyway, I hope you would also enjoy reading my reply.

That\'s all for now! ^^.

See you tomorrow! ^,^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good morning.
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>> OR: Good morning!

Today, our Chinese coworkers started work, and I am also busy to handle many tasks.
>> Today, our Chinese coworkers started to work, and I am also busy to handle many tasks. (PATTERN: start + to-infinitive)

There is a considerable amount of tasks to be done this week, and these never end.
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>> OR: There is a considerable amount of tasks for me to do this week, and they never end.

Frankly speaking, I am a little unhappy with the long holiday they are taking.
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>> OR: Frankly speaking, I am a little unhappy with the long holidays they are taking.

It is because this situation makes me do my work in one sweep, and sometimes, it leads to something wrong.
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>> OR: It is because this situation makes me do my work in one sweep, and sometimes, it leads to some irregularities.

I really want the time to go by in the blink of an eye this week.
>> CORRECT!

See you very soon! ^^
>> CORRECT!

*Essay

Here in Korea, rice and [이름]chi are our staple foods.
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Of course, we need to have some soup and side dishes with those.
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These combinations are very delicious, and Koreans can\'t keep away from that kind of food habits.
>> These combinations are very delicious, and Koreans can\'t keep away from this kind of food habit. (Since you already used THESE, it is better to put THIS than THAT. KIND OF FOOD HABITS is wrong. It should be KIND OF FOOD HABIT.)

Many foreigners said the taste of [이름]chi doesn\'t suit their tastes, and even said the smell of that is terrible.
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>> Many foreigners said the taste of [이름]chi doesn\'t suit their tastes, and even said the smell of it is terrible.

That is natural reactions, and I also can understand their feelings.
>> Those are natural reactions, and I also can understand their feelings. (REACTIONS is plural. Use THOSE not THAT.)

Even if [이름]chi is an excellent food in the nutritional side, but the smell is so strong, so it is easy to make people disgusted.
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>> OR: Even if [이름]chi is an excellent food in the nutritional side, but the smell is so strong, it can easily make people disgusted at it.

However, [이름]chi\'s value is getting higher than higher, and nowadays, it has proudly positioned into the world.
>> However, [이름]chi\'s value is getting higher and higher, and nowadays, it has proudly positioned into the world. (PATTERN: get higher and higer)

We are really proud of this trend, and we should try keeping that permanently in the future.

>> CORRECT!