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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Thursday! It is already Thursday, and our wonderful weekend is coming soon. Do you make a wonderful plan? Somehow, I am really expecting for this weekend. Until then, let's keep our energies high! ^^ See you very soon! *Essay In the past, Koreans mainly have rice with soup and some side dieses three times a day. However, nowadays, most people have a busy pattern of life, so it makes them skip a meal. And then, people tend to prefer having a fast and convenient food, and it makes our food habit westernized. The taste of western food is excellent, but I think it doesn't suit us. These are not only fatty, but also have high calorie, and these make people get fatter and unhealthier. This kind of trend causes obesity, and it leads to a variety of diseases. To prevent adult disease, it would be better to get back to our traditional food habit.

Dear [Name] [이름],   It\'s a day to be happy indeed! ^.^   Thank you for reminding me that it is already Thursday! ^^, I forgot it a little. Hahaha! ^^.   By the way, I haven\'t planned for this coming weekend. I really don\'t know what to plan. I think I will just wait for my friends to plan for my weekend, because, basically, I just want to take some rest on Saturday and Sunday. I think it is better for me to think like that. I feel like I didn\'t really have enough and glorious rest lately. Well, that\'s my plan for now. Hahaha! ^^ However, I feel that it will change when the weekend comes. ^^,   Anyway, I congratulate you for making your composition well. I really like it when I get more information about you and your life as Korean. However, you still need to be careful with the words that you use. You also need to consider your grammar.   Well! ^^ Don\'t worry! ^^, As a whole, you did well! ^^.   I think that\'s all for now! ^^ See you tomorrow! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Happy Thursday! >> CORRECT! It is already Thursday, and our wonderful weekend is coming soon. >> CORRECT! Do you make a wonderful plan? >> CORRECT! >> OR: Have you made a wonderful plan for this coming weekend? Somehow, I am really expecting for this weekend. >> CORRECT! Until then, let\'s keep our energies high! ^^ >> CORRECT! >> OR: Until then, let\'s keep our energy high! (ENERGY is also uncountable. It means the ability to put effort and enthusiasm into an activity, work and other things. When you say ENERGIES, you are talking about the physical and mental effort that you use to do something.) See you very soon! >> CORRECT!   *Essay In the past, Koreans mainly have rice with soup and some side dieses three times a day. >> In the past, Koreans mainly had rice with soup and some side dishes three times a day. (Use PAST TENSE VERBS when you talk about the past. HAVE should be HAD. Be careful also with the spelling of the words you use. DIESES should be DISHES.) However, nowadays, most people have a busy pattern of life, so it makes them skip a meal. >> CORRECT! And then, people tend to prefer having a fast and convenient food, and it makes our food habit westernized. >> CORRECT! The taste of western food is excellent, but I think it doesn\'t suit us.>> CORRECT! These are not only fatty, but also have high calorie, and these make people get fatter and unhealthier. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It is because they are not only fatty, but also high in calorie and make people get fatter and unhealthier. This kind of trend causes obesity, and it leads to a variety of diseases. >> CORRECT! To prevent adult disease, it would be better to get back to our traditional food habit. >> CORRECT! >> OR: To protect adults against diseases, it would be better for us to get back to our traditional food habit.