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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Tuesday! Here in Seoul, it is raining now and a little cold. This time of every year is generally classified into a spring, but the weather is not warm as much as before. I am still wearing a goose-down jumper and long boots. I am really expecting to go cherry-blossom viewing this spring. These are best in the middle of April, and it is coming very soon. If I have a chance, I will show you these by picture. Anyway, here is my composition. Please check it if there are any wrong sentences. See you this evening! ^^ *Essay Nowadays, our diet becomes westernized, so we can see lots of obese people. Today's foods are fattier and more strong-tasting. As we know fully, obesity may lead to all kinds of illness. Because of this, many people start to consider an importance of eating habits. To remove a risk of illness, they would change their eating habits back into Korean traditional foods in a short period of time. I think Korean foods are the best solution for Koreans to get rid of adult disease.

Dear my Understanding Student [이름],   Happy Wednesday! ^.^   I hope you are not annoyed. This is another composition that I think I checked late. I am sorry. T.T   Anyway, I hope you enjoy reading my reply. Don\'t forget to keenly check the corrections and suggestion below in accordance with your writing.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you very soon! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!Happy Tuesday! >> CORRECT! Here in Seoul, it is raining now and a little cold. >> CORRECT! This time of every year is generally classified into a spring, but the weather is not warm as much as before. >> CORRECT! I am still wearing a goose-down jumper and long boots. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I am still wearing a goose-down jumper and a pair of long boots. I am really expecting to go cherry-blossom viewing this spring. >> I am really expecting to go to the cherry blossom viewing this spring. (Put THE before an event which is famous.) These are best in the middle of April, and it is coming very soon. >> This is the best in the middle of April, and it is coming very soon. (We are talking about the cherry blossom viewing, so THESE are should be THIS IS.) If I have a chance, I will show you these by picture. >> CORRECT! Anyway, here is my composition. >> CORRECT! Please check it if there are any wrong sentences. >> CORRECT! See you this evening! ^^>> CORRECT!   *EssayNowadays, our diet becomes westernized, so we can see lots of obese people. >> CORRECT! Today\'s foods are fattier and more strong-tasting. >> CORRECT! As we know fully, obesity may lead to all kinds of illness. >> CORRECT! >> OR: As we know fully, obesity may lead to serious illnesses. >> OR: As we know fully, obesity may lead to malignant illnesses. Because of this, many people start to consider an importance of eating habits. >> Because of this, many people start to consider the importance of eating habits. (PATTERN: the importance of something) To remove a risk of illness, they would change their eating habits back into Korean traditional foods in a short period of time. >> CORRECT! I think Korean foods are the best solution for Koreans to get rid of adult disease. >> I think Korean foods are the best solution for Koreans to get rid of adult diseases. (You forgot to make DISEASE in plural form.)