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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Wednesday! Time flies so fast. It is already Wednesday. You told me in our last class that you didn't make your plan for this coming weekend yet. That's okay. You have plenty of time to think it until then. In my case, I am going to go Gunsan City by train. It is a historic city, and we can feel the historic flavor of the past there. Of course, that is in relation to the characteristic of the modern culture space during Japanese occupation period, but through this, we can remind ourselves how important our country is. Anyway, have a good time today and see you very soon. ^^ *Essay In the past, English grade was not a priority to enter good companies. However, nowadays, English grade is one of the most important requirements everywhere. To reflect this trend, our educational system has been also changed to follow that. I don't think they are requesting reasonable grade of English skill. No matter how hard I think, they request too much. Of course, speaking foreign language is a vital element in this global village. However, I feel that it is needed to keep the balance with others.

Dear [Name] [이름],   Happy Wednesday! ^.^ A wonderful day to both of us! ^^   Here in the Philippines, instead of concentrating on the English language, our educational system demands students to master their own languages or dialects. English course is still in every educational institute\'s curriculum. I can say that Filipinos are luckier than Koreans in terms of education and society. Sorry to say this. This is my opinion.   Anyway, that\'s all for now! ^^ See you tomorrow! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Happy Wednesday! >> CORRECT! Time flies so fast. >> CORRECT! It is already Wednesday. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It is Wednesday already. You told me in our last class that you didn\'t make your plan for this coming weekend yet. >> You told me in our class that you didn\'t make your plans for this coming weekend yet. That\'s okay. >> CORRECT! You have plenty of time to think it until then. >> CORRECT! In my case, I am going to go Gunsan City by train. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In my case, I am going to Gunsan City by train. It is a historic city, and we can feel the historic flavor of the past there. >> It is a historical city, and we can feel the presence of the past there. Of course, that is in relation to the characteristic of the modern culture space during Japanese occupation period, but through this, we can remind ourselves how important our country is. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Of course, that is in relation to the characteristic of the modern culture space during Japanese occupation in our country, but through this, we can remind ourselves how important our country is. Anyway, have a good time today and see you very soon. ^^>> CORRECT!   *Essay In the past, English grade was not a priority to enter good companies. >> CORRECT! However, nowadays, English grade is one of the most important requirements everywhere. >> CORRECT! >> OR: However, nowadays, it is one of the most important requirements everywhere. To reflect this trend, our educational system has been also changed to follow that. >> To reflect in/on/upon this trend, educational system has been also changed to follow that. I don\'t think they are requesting reasonable grade of English skill. >> I don\'t think they are requesting for reasonable grades of English skills. No matter how hard I think, they request too much. >> CORRECT! Of course, speaking foreign language is a vital element in this global village. >> Of course, speaking a foreign language is a vital element in this global village. However, I feel that it is needed to keep the balance with others. >> CORRECT!