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Dear [이름] (My Partner in Crime hahaha),

A thrilling Thursday to you! ^.^

Happy day! ^^

I think you are right.

I am really busy and very tired nowadays.

But, don\'t worry.

I make sure that I monitor my physical and mental conditions.

I am in good shape so far. ^^

I really have more students now.

It is a great gift from The Almighty.

It\'s just I feel strange.

I need to adjust with the kind of schedule I have for now.

Hahaha! ^^

Thank you for being happy for me! ^^

You are really one of my good students.

I love you! ^^

Anyway, you shouldn\'t forget to take care of yourself too! ^^

Health is wealth! ^^,

See you very soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Happy Thursday!
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These days, you seem very busy and tired, so I am a little worried about your condition.
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However, it means that you have more students, and it is great news for you.
>> It means that you have more students, and it is a great news for you. (PATTERN: a/an + adjective + uncountable noun)

I am also happy for you.
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Anyway, keep your health and don\'t make yourself so tired.
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See you this evening!
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*Essay

In my opinion, it is good for us to study languages in schools.
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>> OR: In my opinion, it is good for us to study languages at schools.

Here in Korea, we are being taught two languages in schools.
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>> OR: Here in Korea, we are being taught two languages at school.

One of them is English, and the other one is a second language like Chinese, Japanese and so on.
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Of course, which one I\'d learn is at the discretion of the school.
>> Of course, the one which I\'d learned is at the discretion of the school where I enrolled. (WHICH is used at the beginning of a question. To use it in a statement, it should be written after a noun that it describes. PATTERN: had + past participle. EXAMPLE: had + learned/learnt.)

When I was in high school, I had learnt French, and there was an hour of regular curriculum every week.
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>> OR: When I was in high school, I had learned French, and there was an hour of regular curriculum every week.

However, I forgot that totally, even I don\'t know how to pronounce the French alphabet.
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>> OR: Despite that, I forgot that totally, I even don\'t know how to pronounce the French alphabet.

In my case, I was not interested in that, so I didn\'t put the importance on that.
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On the other hand, the way we were taught was not effective.
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We were trained to memorize words and grammars, and we struggled only to get good grades of it.
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>> OR: We were trained to master vocabulary words and grammar rules, and we struggled only to get good grades of it.

I think it is not only a waste of time and efforts, but also meaningless things.
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Therefore, since we are getting the language education, our educational system must be changed to more effective method.
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>> OR: Therefore, since we are getting the language education, our educational system must be changed to more effective curriculum.

The best way I think is that we can be allotted more time to speak in our class.
>> The best way I think is that we can allot more time to speak in our classes. (We use BE + PP to say that the action is received by the subject.)

In today\'s educational system, we lack the chance to speak, so we should focus on the more practical side of that.

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