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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula,
Happy Friday!
I reviewed our last class this morning, and there is one question to ask you.
Yesterday, you mentioned a phrase 'thick face', and I could understand what you meant.
However, I was amazed that here in Korea we also use same phrase with that, so I was wondering whether you just use Korean's expression in English for me or not.
The reason that I am asking so is that I could not look for the meaning in my dictionary.
I will be waiting for your kind explanation.
See you this evening! ^^
*Essay
In my case, I have a bachelor's degree from university in Chinese language.
Now, I am doing work in relation to Chinese business, and I am using my ability of speaking Chinese to my heart's content.
Come to think of it, that I chose studying Chinese is the best thing, I've ever done.
I think Chinese economy is expanding day-by-day, and we can't deny their potential in the future.
These days, I can't put my time on studying Chinese language because of learning English, so I feel that my Chinese level is getting poor.
Through this, I can remind myself again that there is no end to study foreign language.
As a working person, even if I have no enough time to study, but I must allot my time wisely for these tasks for my future.
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name] [이름],
Happy Friday! ^.^
Let\'s talk about your question.
THICK FACE is an expressions used here in the Philippines.
I think it means the same thing there in Korea.
But, it is also same with THICK-SKIN.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!
>> OR: Dear Teacher Paula,
Happy Friday!>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Happy Friday!
I reviewed our last class this morning, and there is one question to ask you. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: I reviewed our last class this morning, and there is a question I would like to ask you.
Yesterday, you mentioned a phrase \'thick face\', and I could understand what you meant.>> CORRECT!
However, I was amazed that here in Korea we also use same phrase with that, so I was wondering whether you just use Korean\'s expression in English for me or not.
>> However, I was amazed ,that, here in Korea, we also use the same phrase, so I was wondering whether you just used a Korean expression in English for me or not.
The reason that I am asking so is that I could not look for the meaning in my dictionary. >> CORRECT!
I will be waiting for your kind explanation. >> CORRECT!
See you this evening! ^^>> CORRECT!
*Essay
In my case, I have a bachelor\'s degree from university in Chinese language. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: In my case, I have a bachelor\'s degree from university in Chinese language.
Now, I am doing work in relation to Chinese business, and I am using my ability of speaking Chinese to my heart\'s content. >> CORRECT!
Come to think of it, that I chose studying Chinese is the best thing, I\'ve ever done. >> CORRECT!
I think Chinese economy is expanding day-by-day, and we can\'t deny their potential in the future.>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I think China\'s economy is expanding day-by-day, and we can\'t deny their potential in the future.
These days, I can\'t put my time on studying Chinese language because of learning English, so I feel that my Chinese level is getting poor. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: These days, I can\'t put my time on studying Chinese because of learning English, so I feel that my Chinese level is getting poor.
Through this, I can remind myself again that there is no end to study foreign language. >> Through this, I can remind myself again that there is no end to study foreign languages.
As a working person, even if I have no enough time to study, but I must allot my time wisely for these tasks for my future.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: As a working person, even if I don\'t have enough time to study, but I must allot my time wisely for these tasks for my future.
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