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2015-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Friday! I reviewed our last class this morning, and there is one question to ask you. Yesterday, you mentioned a phrase 'thick face', and I could understand what you meant. However, I was amazed that here in Korea we also use same phrase with that, so I was wondering whether you just use Korean's expression in English for me or not. The reason that I am asking so is that I could not look for the meaning in my dictionary. I will be waiting for your kind explanation. See you this evening! ^^ *Essay In my case, I have a bachelor's degree from university in Chinese language. Now, I am doing work in relation to Chinese business, and I am using my ability of speaking Chinese to my heart's content. Come to think of it, that I chose studying Chinese is the best thing, I've ever done. I think Chinese economy is expanding day-by-day, and we can't deny their potential in the future. These days, I can't put my time on studying Chinese language because of learning English, so I feel that my Chinese level is getting poor. Through this, I can remind myself again that there is no end to study foreign language. As a working person, even if I have no enough time to study, but I must allot my time wisely for these tasks for my future.

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Dear [Name] [이름],   Happy Friday! ^.^   Let\'s talk about your question. THICK FACE is an expressions used here in the Philippines. I think it means the same thing there in Korea. But, it is also same with THICK-SKIN.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! >> OR: Dear Teacher Paula, Happy Friday!>> CORRECT! >> OR: Happy Friday! I reviewed our last class this morning, and there is one question to ask you. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I reviewed our last class this morning, and there is a question I would like to ask you. Yesterday, you mentioned a phrase \'thick face\', and I could understand what you meant.>> CORRECT! However, I was amazed that here in Korea we also use same phrase with that, so I was wondering whether you just use Korean\'s expression in English for me or not. >> However, I was amazed ,that, here in Korea, we also use the same phrase, so I was wondering whether you just used a Korean expression in English for me or not. The reason that I am asking so is that I could not look for the meaning in my dictionary. >> CORRECT! I will be waiting for your kind explanation. >> CORRECT! See you this evening! ^^>> CORRECT!   *Essay In my case, I have a bachelor\'s degree from university in Chinese language. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In my case, I have a bachelor\'s degree from university in Chinese language. Now, I am doing work in relation to Chinese business, and I am using my ability of speaking Chinese to my heart\'s content. >> CORRECT! Come to think of it, that I chose studying Chinese is the best thing, I\'ve ever done. >> CORRECT! I think Chinese economy is expanding day-by-day, and we can\'t deny their potential in the future.>> CORRECT! >> OR: I think China\'s economy is expanding day-by-day, and we can\'t deny their potential in the future. These days, I can\'t put my time on studying Chinese language because of learning English, so I feel that my Chinese level is getting poor. >> CORRECT! >> OR: These days, I can\'t put my time on studying Chinese because of learning English, so I feel that my Chinese level is getting poor. Through this, I can remind myself again that there is no end to study foreign language. >> Through this, I can remind myself again that there is no end to study foreign languages. As a working person, even if I have no enough time to study, but I must allot my time wisely for these tasks for my future. >> CORRECT! >> OR: As a working person, even if I don\'t have enough time to study, but I must allot my time wisely for these tasks for my future.

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