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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Monday! I hope you don't suffer from the Monday sickness. How was your weekend? In my case, I went to Kunsan City last Saturday and enjoyed my travel with my boyfriend during the entire day. At that time, it was sunny day, and there were no clouds in the sky, so it was a proper day to travel. I left home at 06:50am to catch a train, and we got there at 10:45am. During boarding a train, we made a list that we wanted to go. First, we went to the most popular Chinese restaurant there to have a Jjamppong. This is one of the most delicious noodles here in Korea, and many people say that it is a heavenly taste. I could totally agree with others' opinion, and that was indeed as I have heard. After dealing with our hunger, we started getting around the city on foot. There were so many places to make us get impressed. However, it was time to go back to Seoul, so we couldn't help to leave the city in a hurry. We rode in a train at 18:45pm, and we took a nap due to our tiredness. It was a wonderful trip, so I really want to suggest to other people to go there. However, I want other people to know that Sweet Rice and Sugar-filled Korean Pancake that is popular there is not better than I though.

Dear [Name] [이름],   A memorable Monday to you! ^.^ Good day! ^^   I will just make my weekend story short. My weekend was like a long celebration of my birthday. Hahaha! ^^ My friends and family made my weekend very special.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you tomorrow! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Happy Monday! >> CORRECT! I hope you don\'t suffer from the Monday sickness. >> CORRECT! How was your weekend? >> CORRECT! In my case, I went to Kunsan City last Saturday and enjoyed my travel with my boyfriend during the entire day. >> CORRECT! At that time, it was sunny day, and there were no clouds in the sky, so it was a proper day to travel. >> At that time, it was a sunny day, and there were no clouds in the sky, so it was a proper day to travel. (PATTERN: a/an + adjective + singular noun/ uncountable noun) >> OR: At that time, it was sunny, and there were no clouds in the sky, so it was a proper day to travel. I left home at 06:50am to catch a train, and we got there at 10:45am. >> I left home at 06:50 am to catch the train, and we got there at 10:45 am. (There should be a space between TIME and AM. A TRAIN should be THE TRAIN since it is a public transportation that is common in your place or country.) During boarding a train, we made a list that we wanted to go. >> During boarding the train, we made a list of the places we wanted to go. (You need to complete the thought in your sentence.) >> OR: While on the train, we made a list of the places we wanted to go.  First, we went to the most popular Chinese restaurant there to have a Jjamppong. >> First, we went to the most popular Chinese restaurant there to have Jjamppong. (Don\'t put an article before a name of a meal.) This is one of the most delicious noodles here in Korea, and many people say that it is a heavenly taste.>> CORRECT! I could totally agree with others\' opinion, and that was indeed as I have heard. >> CORRECT!  After dealing with our hunger, we started getting around the city on foot. >> CORRECT! >> OR: After dealing with our hunger, we started strolling around the city on foot. There were so many places to make us get impressed. >> CORRECT! However, it was time to go back to Seoul, so we couldn\'t help to leave the city in a hurry. >> CORRECT! We rode in a train at 18:45pm, and we took a nap due to our tiredness. >> We rode in the train at 18:45 pm and we took a nap due to our tiredness. It was a wonderful trip, so I really want to suggest to other people to go there. >> CORRECT! However, I want other people to know that Sweet Rice and Sugar-filled Korean Pancake that is popular there is not better than I though. >> However, I want other people to know that Sweet Rice and Sugar-filled Korean Pancake that is popular there is not better than I thought. (I think you forgot to type T to the word THOUGHT.)