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Dear [Name], Have a nice day! *Essay There are some reasons of water pollution. First, we have an adequate water supply plant, and it makes people use water everywhere. This situation can prevent people from thinking of its importance. Let's say there is no enough water to use! In this situation, how can we use it to the fullest? If we go back in time to find out what happened upon old times when I wasn't even born, we can learn a lot from ancestors' lives. They only got supply of water through river and need to fetch it from significant distances. In this case, they wouldn't waste it thoughtlessly. Second, charge of using water is too cheap, and it is easy to make people not to consider its importance. In my case, I pay water fee once in two months, and the amount is around USD10. We can buy a cup of coffee with USD5, and then you can guess its level in comparison to coffee's price. Let's suppose water fee is about USD30~50. I think I couldn't use it as much as we like due to the expensive fee. Third, we really need to change our minds and start taking it as a serious matter. Water is the most important natural resource, and we can't live without it. If we don't change our mind right now, suffering from the pain will be our future generations. Just the thought of it is scaring me. From now on, I should practice from small things in my daily life to save and keep water.

Dear [이름],   A pleasant day to the both of us! ^.^ Happy Wednesday! ^^   I am glad that you showed your concern towards water reservation through your composition. I totally agree with all you have said in your writing. I also really hope for all people in this planet to care about water. All of us should think water as gold. It\'s not only time is gold. It\'s also water is gold. Even other natural resources are gold.   Anyway, have a peaceful Wednesday night! ^^ See you tomorrow! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear [Name],>> CORRECT! Have a nice day!>> CORRECT!   *Essay There are some reasons of water pollution. >> CORRECT! >> OR: There are some causes of water pollution. >> OR: There are some roots why there is water pollution. First, we have an adequate water supply plant, and it makes people use water everywhere. >> CORRECT! >> OR: First, we have adequate water supply plants, and they make people use water everywhere. (Do you have only one dam in your country?) This situation can prevent people from thinking of its importance. >> CORRECT! Let\'s say there is no enough water to use! >> CORRECT! >> OR: Let\'s say there isn\'t any water for is to use! In this situation, how can we use it to the fullest? >> CORRECT! If we go back in time to find out what happened upon old times when I wasn\'t even born, we can learn a lot from ancestors\' lives. >> CORRECT! >> OR: If we go back in time to find out what happened upon old times when we weren\'t even born, we can learn a lot from our ancestors\' lives. >> OR: If we go back in time to find out what happened upon old times when we weren\'t even born, we can learn a lot from our ancestors\' life styles.  They only got supply of water through river and need to fetch it from significant distances. >> They only got the supply of water through rivers and needed to fetch it from significant distances. (NEED should be NEEDED because you are describing the past. PATTERN: the supply of something) In this case, they wouldn\'t waste it thoughtlessly. >> CORRECT! Second, charge of using water is too cheap, and it is easy to make people not to consider its importance. >> Second, the charge of using water is too cheap, and it is easy to make people not to consider its importance. (Use THE before the word charge has a particular idea.) In my case, I pay water fee once in two months, and the amount is around USD10. >> CORRECT! We can buy a cup of coffee with USD5, and then you can guess its level in comparison to coffee\'s price. >> CORRECT! Let\'s suppose water fee is about USD30~50. >> CORRECT! I think I couldn\'t use it as much as we like due to the expensive fee. >> I think I can\'t use it as much as we like due to the expensive fee. (CAN\'T should be COULDN\'T because of LIKE.) Third, we really need to change our minds and start taking it as a serious matter.>> CORRECT! Water is the most important natural resource, and we can\'t live without it. >> CORRECT! If we don\'t change our mind right now, suffering from the pain will be our future generations. >> If we don\'t change our mind right now, suffering from pain will be our future generations\' condition. (I think your sentence is not complete.) >> OR: If we don\'t change our thinking towards the consumption of water right now, suffering from pain will be our future generations\' condition. Just the thought of it is scaring me. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Just the thought of it gives me the shivers. From now on, I should practice from small things in my daily life to save and keep water. >> CORRECT!