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Dear [이름],

A restful Friday night to us! ^.^

Happy Friday! ^^

I am really glad that you were somehow free from your boss at your work today.

I can imagine you working without any worries.

Hahaha! ^^

By the way, I really hope I can just rest totally this coming weekend.

I want to reward myself.

I think I gave a lot of effort and energy this week.

Well, I will force myself not to accept any appointments.

Good luck to me! ^^

I need to be somehow snobbish.

Anyway, about your cleanest water there in Korea, is it really the cleanest?

Why is there a strong smell?

I think if it is really clean, it will not have any smell.

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you on Monday! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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>> OR: Dear [Name],

Happy Friday!
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Today, my boss is not in the office, so I feel happier than general Friday. Hahaha!
>> Today, my boss is not in the office, so I feel happier than a general Friday. Hahaha! (You should put A before ADJECTIVE + NAME OF A DAY.)

Through your last writing, I felt that you are a little tired due to a long working time.
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I hope your friends don\'t ask you to go out with them just this coming weekend. ^^;;
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See you very soon.
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>> OR: See you soon!

*Essay

Yes, I do.
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>> OR: Yes, I think so.

Nowadays, people start concerning with water pollution problem, of course, that is a good sign for human beings.
>> Nowadays, people start to concern with water pollution problems, of course, that is a good sign for human beings. (PATTERN: start + to base-verb.)

About 15yeras ago, we had never imagined that we would buy water to drink in the supermarket.
>> About 15 years ago, we had never imagined that we would buy water to drink in the supermarket. (There should be a space between a number and a word.)

Now, buying water is a common situation, so we can see many people carrying that in one hand everywhere.
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In my case, I haven\'t drunk tap water for about 10years, so I buy that in bulk by internet shopping.
>> In my case, I haven\'t drunk tap water for about 10 years, so i buy that in bulk by internet shopping. (There should be a space between a number and a word.)

Maybe, I might think unconsciously that tap water is not clean as much as I think.
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Our government tries to promote the cleanness of water and is pushing people to drink it.
>> Our government tries to promote the cleanest water and is pushing people to drink it. (CLEANNESS should be CLEANEST.)

The reason why I don\'t drink it is that the smell is not good because of the disinfection.
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I think even if the water quality is getting better, it is hard to remove the smell of that.
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I wish I could drink it without any worries someday.

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