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Dear Teacher Paula, Good morning! Did you have a good rest last weekend? In my case, I went to the outlet mall in Paju to buy running shoes. There are selling goods cheaper than retail markets. We bought a pair of shoes for half price. That was for my boyfriend, but I couldn't get my shoes because of the size My size is 240mm, but there only remained anther size. That's okay, next time, I will be sure to get a good item there! Hahaha! Anyway, today is Monday, and I hope you can have a good day. See you this evening! P.S.: Our cleanest water is clean, and the smell is not strong. However, it has a little smell of disinfection. Maybe, people who are not very sensitive might not smell that. ^^;; *Essay Here in Korea, there are lots of TV programs and channels on TV. We can choose what we want to watch. In my case, after being 30 years old, I don't enjoy watching TV. It is because I think today's TV program is so childish and unnatural. Therefore, I sometimes watch programs such as challenging, creative, and realistic genre. As I am getting older, I think my interest in TV programs also has changed with my age. Now, I really can understand why old people like teuroteu. Hahaha! P.S: Teuroteu is a kind of musical genre in Korea, and old people over 45~50 years old like to listen to that kind of music.

Dear my Student [이름],   Good day! ^.^   To start, I will answer your question. I had some rest last weekend. I didn\'t go out to meet my friends. I just went out to go to hospital to accompany my niece to hospital. Don\'t worry. She is okay now. ^^   By the way, thanks for clarifying the issue about the cleanest water there in your country. ^^, Thanks also for answering the essay question fully and honestly. ^^. I like your answer. Very good! ^^   Anyway, have a great evening! ^^ See you tomorrow! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear Teacher Paula, >>CORRECT! Good morning!>> CORRECT! Did you have a good rest last weekend? >> CORRECT! In my case, I went to the outlet mall in Paju to buy running shoes. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In my case, I went to the outlet mall in Paju to nuy a pair of running shoes. There are selling goods cheaper than retail markets. >> CORRECT! >> OR: They are selling goods there cheaper than retail markets. We bought a pair of shoes for half price. >> CORRECT! That was for my boyfriend, but I couldn\'t get my shoes because of the size>> That was for my boyfriend, but I couldn\'t get my shoes because of the size. (You forgot to put a dot after your sentence.) My size is 240mm, but there only remained anther size. >> My size is 240 mm, but there are only remained another size. (There should be a space between numbers and units of measure.) That\'s okay, next time, I will be sure to get a good item there! Hahaha!>> CORRECT! Anyway, today is Monday, and I hope you can have a good day. >> CORRECT! See you this evening! >> CORRECT! P.S.: Our cleanest water is clean, and the smell is not strong. >> CORRECT! However, it has a little smell of disinfection.>> CORRECT! Maybe, people who are not very sensitive might not smell that. ^^;;>> CORRECT!   *Essay Here in Korea, there are lots of TV programs and channels on TV. >> CORRECT! We can choose what we want to watch. >> CORRECT! >> OR: We can choose whatever we want to watch. In my case, after being 30 years old, I don\'t enjoy watching TV. >> CORRECT! It is because I think today\'s TV program is so childish and unnatural. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It is because I think today\'s programs are so childish and unnatural. Therefore, I sometimes watch programs such as challenging, creative, and realistic genre. >> Therefore, I sometimes watch programs such as challenging, creative, and realistic genres. (You gave different characteristics of programs in your sentence. You should put GENRE in plutal form.) As I am getting older, I think my interest in TV programs also has changed with my age. >> CORRECT! Now, I really can understand why old people like teuroteu. Hahaha! >> CORRECT! >> OR: Now, I really understand why old people like Teurotue. P.S: Teuroteu is a kind of musical genre in Korea, and old people over 45~50 years old like to listen to that kind of music. >> P.S.: Teurotue is a kind of musical genre in Korea, and old people over 45~50 years old like to listen to that kind of music. (You forgot to put a dot after S.)