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2015-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If you had to choose one, would you consider yourself a big-picture person or a detail-oriented person? Why? I am a detail-oriented person son I get stressed out when the things are not on the place or the things happen what I don't want. I know that I shouldn't be and try to take it easy but it is really hard to change it. I want to be a big picture person and I want to take things easy so that I will not be stressed out and can enjoy the moment more.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

I am hoping that your day is still doing fine. ^^

And that you are also doing okay.

I will call you again tomorrow!

Thank you for today!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


If you had to choose one, would you consider yourself a big-picture person or a detail-oriented person? Why?

I am a detail-oriented person son I get stressed out when the things are not on the place or the things happen what I don\'t want.

>> I am a detail-oriented person because I get stressed out when things are not in place or things which I do not want to happen.
 I know that I shouldn\'t be and try to take it easy but it is really hard to change it.

>> I know that I shouldn\'t be like that and try to take it easy, but it is really hard to change it.

I want to be a big picture person and I want to take things easy so that I will not be stressed out and can enjoy the moment more.

>> I want to be a big picture person and I  want to take things easily so that I will not be stressed out and I could enjoy more the moment.

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