Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Wednesday! Now, I am checking your corrections against my last composition, but I have a question about a word 'broadcast'. I thought it was also correct to be used as broadcast-broadcast-broadcast. It is wrong? Wow! Studying English is so hard. ^^;; Please help me to clarify that for me. ^^ See you very soon. *Essay Nowadays, single person households are growing day-by-day, and people also have changed as individualism. In this social mood, people start to hate being hindered from other people, and they tend to prefer enjoying their time alone. However, if people spend time alone for a long time, loneliness is sure to follow. In this case, the best way to comfort loneliness is to watch TV. The way of that is not only cheap, but also comfortable to kill time. Moreover, we have a huge of choices for TV programs, so we can be picky about what we watch. Sometimes, we miss a few programs in real-time on TV due to our busyness. In this case, our TV always provides the reruns for free, and we can choose the time we want to watch. Because of this easiness, it makes people fall into TV programs easily. In my case, I don't enjoy watching TV, but sometimes, I just leave it on for a long time. The reason why I am doing so is that I seem like being with someone, so I can remove a sense of loneliness.

Dear my Attentive Student [이름],   Happy Wednesday, too! ^.^   Ohhh~~~ I think I made a mistake yesterday. You are right. It should only be broadcast. Broadcasted is wrong. I apologize for that.   By the waym studying English is really hard. However, you are doing great in our classes. So, don\'t worry a lot about it. Don\'t stress yourself in accordance to learning English.   Anyway, I absolutely agree with your statement in your composition, that watching TV can help someone not to feel lonely from being alone.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Enjoy reading! ^^, See you very soon in our class! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Happy Wednesday!>> CORRECT! Now, I am checking your corrections against my last composition, but I have a question about a word \'broadcast\'.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Now, I am checking your corrections regarding my last composition, but I have a question about a word \'broadcast\'. I thought it was also correct to be used as broadcast-broadcast-broadcast. >> CORRECT! It is wrong? >> Is it wrong? (PATTERN: be-verb + subject + object? Wow! Studying English is so hard. ^^;; >> CORRECT! Please help me to clarify that for me. ^^ >> CORRECT! See you very soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you soon!   *Essay Nowadays, single person households are growing day-by-day, and people also have changed as individualism. >> Nowadays, single person households are growing day-by-day, and people also have changed as individuals. (PATTERN: as + somebody) >> OR: Nowadays, single person households are growing day-by-day, and people also have changed their individualism. In this social mood, people start to hate being hindered from other people, and they tend to prefer enjoying their time alone. >> In this social mood, people start to hate being hindered by other people, and they tend to prefer enjoying their time alone. >> OR: In this social mood, people start to hate hindrance from other people, and they tend to prefer enjoying their time alone. >> OR: In this social mood, people start to hate being hindered because of other people, and they tend to prefer enjoying their time alone. >> OR: In this social mood, people start to hate other people hindering them from doing some things they like, and they tend to prefer enjoying their time alone. However, if people spend time alone for a long time, loneliness is sure to follow. >> CORRECT! In this case, the best way to comfort loneliness is to watch TV. >> In this case, the best way to avoid loneliness is to watch TV. (I think COMFORT here is not a proper word to use. It is better to use AVOID.) >> OR: In this case, the best way to cope up with loneliness is by watching TV. The way of that is not only cheap, but also comfortable to kill time. >> CORRECT! Moreover, we have a huge of choices for TV programs, so we can be picky about what we watch. >> CORRECT! Sometimes, we miss a few programs in real-time on TV due to our busyness. >> CORRECT! In this case, our TV always provides the reruns for free, and we can choose the time we want to watch. >> CORRECT! Because of this easiness, it makes people fall into TV programs easily. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Because of this ease, it makes people be hooked up to TV programs easily. In my case, I don\'t enjoy watching TV, but sometimes, I just leave it on for a long time. >> In my case, I don\'t enjoy watching TV, but, sometimes, I just leave it on for a long time. (You forgot to put another comma after BUT.) The reason why I am doing so is that I seem like being with someone, so I can remove a sense of loneliness. >> CORRECT!