Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good day. I thought our boss went to Changwon City on his business trip this morning, but he is going to set off for there this afternoon. Before his business trip, I had to hear a lot of scolding. There is a serious problem we are facing now, so our boss seems to be unable to rest under this circumstance. In this case, I really should concentrate on solving this problem today. ^^;; See you this evening! *Essay Our lives are so long, sometimes, there is a possibility for us to take the wrong courses. In that case, if someone is our role model, we can get over hardships easily in a long life time. For example, let's say a lady is preparing to be an announcer, but she failed her announcer test many times. She really admires one of announcers, and she never misses her news in the morning no matter how busy she is. She already made a decision to be like her, and she is studying how to be a good announcer through her. Even if she failed many times, she might be encouraged by her role model during her challenge. In her case, that announcer really can give her inspiration to pursue her ideal. Of course, a blind imitation of role model can lead to lose individualities of each, so we should try to look for our personalities through many experiences at the same time.

Dear [이름],   Greetings! ^.^ A lovely Tuesday to you! ^^   I think your boss really trust you a lot. You are the only person he annoys about company things when he\'s away. I am glad, because you are embracing all of the tasks from your boss with positivism. I am also happy that you understand your boss totally.   Anyway, you have made  a good composition today! ^^ I like your example to justify your answer to the essay question I gave you. Very good! ^^   Just, be careful with some errors. That\'s all for now! ^^ Good night! ^^, Sleep tight! ^^. See you tomorrow! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good day. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good day! I thought our boss went to Changwon City on his business trip this morning, but he is going to set off for there this afternoon. >> CORRECT! Before his business trip, I had to hear a lot of scolding.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Before his business trip, I had to hear a lot of scoldings. There is a serious problem we are facing now, so our boss seems to be unable to rest under this circumstance. >> CORRECT! In this case, I really should concentrate on solving this problem today. ^^;;>> CORRECT! See you this evening!>> CORRECT!   *Essay Our lives are so long, sometimes, there is a possibility for us to take the wrong courses. >> Our lives are so long. Sometimes, there is a possibility for us to take wrong courses. (You should make your sentence into two sentences. Since I don\'t know THE WRONG COURSES you indicated here, it is better to remove THE.) >> OR: Our lives are so long; sometimes, there is a possibility for us to take wrong courses. In that case, if someone is our role model, we can get over hardships easily in a long life time. >> CORRECT! For example, let\'s say a lady is preparing to be an announcer, but she failed her announcer test many times. >> CORRECT! >> OR: For example, let\'s say a lady wants to be an announcer, but she failed to pass the tests for fulfilling her dreams many times. She really admires one of announcers, and she never misses her news in the morning no matter how busy she is. >> She really admires one of the announcers, and she never misses her news on the morning no matter how busy she is. (PATTERN: one of the + plural noun) She already made a decision to be like her, and she is studying how to be a good announcer through her. >> CORRECT! Even if she failed many times, she might be encouraged by her role model during her challenge. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Even if she failed many times, she might be encouraged by her role model during difficult times in her life. In her case, that announcer really can give her inspiration to pursue her ideal. >> CORRECT! Of course, a blind imitation of role model can lead to lose individualities of each, so we should try to look for our personalities through many experiences at the same time. >> Of course, a blind imitation of role model can lead to lose individuality of each, so we should try to look for our personalities through many experiences at the same time. (INDIVIDUALITY is an uncountable noun. Therefore, it is really impossible to make it into INDIVIDUALITIES.)