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Dear [Name].Hellen, Good morning! First of all thank you for your e-mail. But now, I cannot log in Bellin suddenly. I requested solution to Germany and I'm wating for reply. I will check as soon as receive ID. Thank you.

Hello my dear! Don't worry, it will be better soon and you can log in already okay? Always think positive. I now everything will be okay with your help of course,kkk..:D Talk to you later my dear.. T.Camille   Here are my corrections.   composition >> Correct but you should write it with a capital letter C. Dear [Name].Hellen, >>correct but you have to put a space on Ms. (Ms. [Name]) Good morning! >> CorrectFirst of all thank you for your e-mail. >> CorrectBut now, I cannot log in Bellin suddenly. >> But I've got a problem because I can't suddenly log in.I requested solution to Germany and I'm wating for reply. >> I already requested a possible solution in Germany and I'm waiting for their reply right now.I will check as soon as receive ID. >> I will immediately check their reply as soon as possible.Thank you. >> Correct