Composition

Dear my blessed Student [이름],

T.G.I.F.~~~!!! ^.^

A happy Friday to a positive person like you. ^^

What are my plans this weekend?

Aha!!! ^^,

Tomorrow, I will meet one of my friends and her son.

We will play bowling and billiards, but I am not yet sure about it.

My friends hasn\'t made any confirmation about it.

I am still waiting for her message saying that our bowling and billiards appointment will push through.

On Sunday, I don\'t have any plans yet.

Hahaha! ^^.

By the way, I think you are just kidding me.

You don\'t have any plans for the coming weekend.

Is that really true?

Hmmm! ^^

I think you are not thinking like [이름].

Hahaha! ^^,

I am just kidding.

Anyway, I am happy for you that your favorite season is rapidly coming.

You won\'t wear annoying clothes anymore.

Hahaha! ^^

Anyhow, see you soon! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Happy Friday!
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It is approaching. Our weekend!!!!!
>> It is approaching, our weekend! (It is better to make those sentences as one by changing the period into comma.)

Do you have something special for this coming weekend?
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In my case, I don\'t have any plans yet.
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According to the weather forecast, it will be a rainy day tomorrow, so I might be unable to enjoy a feel of spring.
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That\'s okay.
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It means that our spring will come to us more closely, and then, we don\'t need to wear heavy clothes anymore.
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>> OR: It means that our spring will come to us more closely, and then, we don\'t need to wear heavy and thick clothes anymore.

I somehow feel stuffy with wearing thick clothes.
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>> OR: I somehow feel stuffy with wearing those kinds of clothes.

I really hope I can smell the scent of spring in the air very soon.
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See you this evening! ^^
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*Essay

From my opinion, young people will be most influenced by mess media.
>> From my opinion, young people will be most influenced by mass media. (I think you committed a mistake in relation to the word MASS.)

Nowadays, we can be exposed to lots of information without any difficulties in the internet, and sometimes, it gives bad influences on us.
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>> OR: Nowadays, we can be exposed to lots of information without any difficulties on the web, and sometimes, it gives bad influences on us.

>> OR:  These days, we can be exposed to lots of information without any hardships on the web. Moreover, sometimes, it gives bad influences on us.

There are a lot of violent, cruel, and sexual scenes on our TV, and if we put our mind to that, we can easily watch that without any censorship.
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>> OR: There are a lot of violent, cruel, and sexual scenes on TV, and if we put our mind to that, we can easily watch that without any restriction.

As we already know, if our young people are exposed to that early, it might influence their emotional growth seriously, and it might lead to make them take to evil courses.
>> As we already know, if our youths are exposed to that early, it might influence their emotional growth seriously. In addition, it might lead them to take evil courses.

>> OR: From what we already know, if our youths are exposed to that early, it might influence their emotional growth seriously. Furthermore, it might lead them to make evil courses.

That\'s why many parents are controlling their children not to be hooked up to that kind of bad mess media, but realistically, that is out of their control.
>> That\'s why many parents are controlling their children not to be hooked up to that kind of bad mass media, but realistically, that is out of their control. (MESS MEDIA should be MASS MEDIA.)

>> OR: That\'s why many parents are controlling their children not to be hooked up to that kind of bad mass media. However, realistically, that is out of their control.

How can we control this situation?
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>> OR: How can we control this matter?

In the long run, that is a matter of building an upright character, and at the same time, our older generation really should do self-reflection.

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>> OR: In the long run, that is a matter of building an upright character, and at once, our older generation really should do self-reflection.