Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good morning. Did you enjoy playing bowling and billiards with your friend yesterday? I am a little curious, if your friend brings her son, could you enjoy your time with her? In my case, if my friends bring their children, we only can talk to each other at the coffee shop. In addition, because of their scatterbrained children, we can't concentrate on our talks. Due to that kind of difficulty, we prefer to meet to each other at home so that they can control their children easily. Anyway, I just hope you really had a wonderful time with your friend yesterday. ^^ See you tomorrow. *Essay Here in Korea, many people like to go hiking on weekends. There are a lot of mountains here, so we can easily approach those whenever we want. Going hiking has many advantages to us. That is not only making us healthy, but also giving us a feeling of extreme challenge. I also like going hiking, and I usually go Bukhan Mountain. The mountain has rough and irregular features, so it is easy for us to be in danger in a moment if we aren’t careful. In that case, it is vital to prepare all kinds of equipments to protect our safety. These days, it is spring time in Korea, so people of going hiking are growing to watch spring flowers such as cherry blooms, forsythia and azalea. I haven't gone hiking this spring because of my busyness and changeable weather. The main reason why I didn't go is a yellow dust from China. On a blisteringly strong yellow dust, I really don't know when I can enjoy a feeling of spring. Suddenly, I really resent China for causing this kind of terrible yellow dust to us.

Dear my Student [이름],   Happy Monday! ^.^   First of all, I would like to tell you about my plan with my friend that I told you. Sadly to say, it was cancelled. Her son went to his father\'s province to meet his cousins there. Therefore, my friend and I didn\'t meet anymore. But, we will meet this coming weekend for celebrating the Holy Week here in the Philippines.   By the way, I think it is really difficult for friends to meet each other when they already have their own families and kids. However, in your case with your friends, you are still lucky. You can still meet them, and they can still meet you.   Anyway, I hope the yellow dust just disappear in order for you and other Koreans to have a fresh spring.   That\'s all for now! ^^ I miss you! T.T See you tomorrow! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good morning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! Did you enjoy playing bowling and billiards with your friend yesterday? >> CORRECT! I am a little curious, if your friend brings her son, could you enjoy your time with her? >> CORRECT! >> OR: I am a little curious, if your friend brought her son, could you enjoy your time with her? >> OR:  I am a little curious, if your friend brings her son, can you enjoy your time with her? In my case, if my friends bring their children, we only can talk to each other at the coffee shop. >> CORRECT! In addition, because of their scatterbrained children, we can\'t concentrate on our talks. >> CORRECT! Due to that kind of difficulty, we prefer to meet to each other at home so that they can control their children easily. >> Due to that kind of difficulty, we prefer to meet each other at home, so that they can control their children easily. (PATTERN: meet each other) >> OR: Due to that kind of difficulty, we prefer to meet each other at someone\'s home, so that they can control their kids easily. Anyway, I just hope you really had a wonderful time with your friend yesterday. ^^>> CORRECT! See you tomorrow.>> CORRECT! >> OR: See you tomorrow!   *Essay Here in Korea, many people like to go hiking on weekends.>> CORRECT! There are a lot of mountains here, so we can easily approach those whenever we want. >> CORRECT! Going hiking has many advantages to us. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Going on a hike has numerous advantages to us. That is not only making us healthy, but also giving us a feeling of extreme challenge. >> CORRECT! >> OR: That can\'t only make ud healthy, but also can give us a feeling of extreme challenge. I also like going hiking, and I usually go Bukhan Mountain.>> CORRECT! The mountain has rough and irregular features, so it is easy for us to be in danger in a moment if we aren’t careful. >> CORRECT! In that case, it is vital to prepare all kinds of equipments to protect our safety. >> In that case, it is vital to prepare all kinds of equipment to protect our safety. (EQUIPMENT is uncountable, so it is incorrect to make it plural.) These days, it is spring time in Korea, so people of going hiking are growing to watch spring flowers such as cherry blooms, forsythia and azalea.  >> These days, it is spring time in Korea, so the number of people going hiking are growing to watch spring flowers such as cherry blooms, forsythia and azalea. (I think your sentence is not yet complete.) I haven\'t gone hiking this spring because of my busyness and changeable weather.>> I haven\'t gone hiking this spring because of my busyness and the changeable weather. (When you talk about THE WEATHER, don\'t forget to write THE since the idea is specific.) The main reason why I didn\'t go is a yellow dust from China. >> The main reason why I didn\'t go is the yellow dust from China. (THE YELLOW DUST is one of a kind. In addition, it is specific from your writing, because you used CHINA. Therefore, you must use THE.) On a blisteringly strong yellow dust, I really don\'t know when I can enjoy a feeling of spring. >> CORRECT! Suddenly, I really resent China for causing this kind of terrible yellow dust to us. >> CORRECT!