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2011-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name].JieTing Bian, Good afternoon! You can find debit notes as seen below. We didn't receive information that cancelled debit note yet. If you have any questions please let me know. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

My dear Bella, A great job for your writing!:) Just contnue what youve started.. Keep up the good work.. Talk to you again later my dear.. T.Cam Dear [Name].JieTing Bian,>>correct! (But you have to observe the correct punctuation mark..)Good afternoon!>>correct!You can find debit notes as seen below.>>correct!We didn't receive information that cancelled debit note yet.>>We  havent received any information that cancelled the debit note yet.If you have any questions please let me know.>>correct!Thank you.

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