Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear my marvelous Student [이름],
A terrific Tuesday! ^.^
Happy day! ^^
First of all, let me say I MISS YOU.
Yesterday was not a complete day.
You made me miss you a lot.
Well, don\'t worry. ^^
I understand you. ^^,
By the way, here in the Philippines, we don\'t really experience the yellow dust that is coming from China.
We are really lucky.
However, I am worried about your situation there.
I know that that kind of dust is really dangerous.
You should use a special mask.
Anyway, I really hope that the rain can totally make the yellow dust disappear.
That\'s all for now! ^^
See you very soon! ^^,
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula,
>> CORRECT!
Good morning.
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>> OR: Good morning!
Sorry for my absence yesterday.
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>> OR: I am sorry for being absent yesterday in our class.
I didn\'t want to skip our class yesterday, but because of the terrible traffic here, I could not get to my house on time, so I couldn\'t help to postpone our class.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I didn\'t want to skip our class yesterday, but because of the terrible traffic on my way home, I couldn\'t get to my house on time, so I couldn\'t help to postpone it.
By the way, here in Korea, it is the terrible yellow dust again today.
>> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: By the way, here in Korea, there is the terrible yellow dust again today.
I really should wear a mask to protect my respiratory organs whenever I go out.
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It is very inconvenient.
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It is because I usually put on glasses, and whenever I breathe, my glasses steam up. ^^;;
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>> OR: It is because I usuallu put on my glasses, and whenever I breathe, my glasses steam up.
I wish I would live in an area where the air is clean.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I wish I could live in an area where there\'s clean air.
How about there?
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I think there is no problem to breath.
>> I think there is no problem to breathe. (I think you forgot to type E at the last part of BREATH.)
You are lucky. ^^
>> CORRECT!
According to the weather forecast, it will rain this afternoon until tomorrow.
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I think it will solve this problem a little.
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>> OR: I think it will solve this problem somehow.
A rainy day would be good rather than a shiny day in this case.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: A rainy day would be good rather then a sunny day in this case.
See you very soon.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: See you soon!
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