Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good morning. Today, our technician from China will visit here, so I have to go to the airport to meet him. There are lots of tasks I have to do today, but because of this schedule, I would not finish my today's tasks. I have to set off for there at 12:00 PM, and I will get there about at 14:00~14:30 PM. After meeting him, both of us have to get back to our office again. If we get back to our office, it will be almost 17:30 PM. My daily schedule today is like that. ^^;; I think it will be a busy day for me. See you soon. *Essay In my opinion, that is related to national character. Here in Korea, these days, many people prefer to go hiking with hiking club's people together. It means that Korean people really like group activities. The second reason why people like doing that is related to expense. To go on a hike, we don't need to spend much money. We can only prepare a lunch box, some energy bars and water. How reasonable it is! The last reason is that people start to be more concerned with their health than before. When we reach the top of the mountain, we can get fresh air and train our body and mind. Of course, it is vital for us to do that regularly to get its effectiveness.

Dear my Student [이름],   Good evening! ^.^   To start, I would like to say that I am sad because of you not attending our class today. But, that is okay. Through your composition, I already understand why you couldn\'t avoid being absent in our class. On the other hand, I feel glad, because I know that you can practice speaking in Chinese and English because of the Chinese technician who is visiting your company. I think you really need to talk a lot with him Good luck! ^^   By the way, it is good to know that Koreans are really becoming aware of their health. They are more into activities that will challenge them physically and mentally. Since you mentioned this things on your writing, it means that you are one of them, right? ^^,   Anyway, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestion I indicated below for your further improvement when it comes to writing. Happy reading! ^^ Enjoy your evening! ^^, Have a wonderful sleep later! ^^. See you tomorrow! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good morning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! >> OR: A good morning to you! Today, our technician from China will visit here, so I have to go to the airport to meet him. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Today, out Chinese technician will visit here, so I have to go to the airport to fetch him. There are lots of tasks I have to do today, but because of this schedule, I would not finish my today\'s tasks.>> CORRECT! >> OR: There are lots of tasks I have to do today, but because of this schedule, I might not finish them this day. I have to set off for there at 12:00 PM, and I will get there about at 14:00~14:30 PM. >> I have to set off for there at 12:00 pm, and I will get there at approximately 14:00 pm. (Other people use AT ABOUT, but this is considered as a breach of grammar. AT and ABOUT can\'t be together, because they have different meanings.) >> OR: I have to set off for there at 12:00 pm, and I will get there about 14:00 pm. After meeting him, both of us have to get back to our office again. >> CORRECT! If we get back to our office, it will be almost 17:30 PM. >> CORRECT! >> OR: If we arrive in our office, it might already be 17:30 pm. My daily schedule today is like that. ^^;;>> CORRECT! I think it will be a busy day for me. >> CORRECT!See you soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you soon!   *Essay In my opinion, that is related to national character. >> CORRECT! Here in Korea, these days, many people prefer to go hiking with hiking club\'s people together. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Here in Korea, these days, many people prefer to go hiking under a hiking club together with it\'s members. It means that Korean people really like group activities. >> It means that Koreans really like group activities. (You should be specific with the nationality of people in a country. It is better to say KOREANS than KOREAN PEOPLE.) The second reason why people like doing that is related to expense. >> CORRECT! >> OR: The other reason is about expenses. To go on a hike, we don\'t need to spend much money. >> CORRECT! >> OR: To go on a hike, we don\'t need to spend plenty of money. We can only prepare a lunch box, some energy bars and water. >> CORRECT! >> OR: We can just prepare for our own hiking necessities like a lunch box, some energy bars and water. How reasonable it is! >> CORRECT! >> OR: How reasonable it is, isn\'t it? The last reason is that people start to be more concerned with their health than before. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Lastly, it is due to the higher concern of people about their health. When we reach the top of the mountain, we can get fresh air and train our body and mind. >> CORRECT! >> OR: When we get to the summit, we can breathe fresh air and train our body and mind. Of course, it is vital for us to do that regularly to get its effectiveness. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Of course, it is vital for us to do that regularly to get its effectiveness and efficiency.