Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Thursday! First of all, I would like to say sorry about my absence in our class yesterday. As I mentioned in my last composition, I had to meet our technician from China, so I could not attend our class. Originally, our boss goes to fetch him by his car whenever he visits, but due to his personal schedule, he could not put his time to do that. Yesterday, not only I took him to his hotel, but also treat him to dinner. At that time, I took one of my colleagues who majored in Chinese to let him practice his Chinese with our technician. However, he did not utter a word with him during our dinner. I just wanted to give him a chance to use Chinese, but he seemed to be very shy. Because of his passive personality, I was the only one who talks with him consistently in that situation. During our talks, I found myself using some words in English involuntarily when I spoke Chinese. I think there are two languages running in my head, and it is a little bit hard to control that perfectly. Hahaha! Well, it is sure to be related to practice. ^^ By the way, I just got a message from Power English that our teachers submitted Easter eggs for a contest. Did you also make that for this contest? ^^ See you this evening!

Dear my busy Student [이름],   A marvelous THURSDAY! ^.^   To start, I would like to tell you that I am okay with your absence yesterday. I totally understand you. In fact, it benefited both of us. I took some good rest, and you practiced your Chinese. Yesterday was still a fantastic day for us, but not really with your friend.   Anyway, I am sorry. I think I disappointed you for not actively joining in the Easter Egg Contest. Don\'t worry. Next time, I will definitely will.   That\' all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, Happy weekend! ^^. See you on Monday! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! >> OR: Dear Teacher Paula, Happy Thursday! >> CORRECT! >> OR: Greeting you a happy Thursday! First of all, I would like to say sorry about my absence in our class yesterday. >> CORRECT! >> OR: First of all, I would like to apologize about my absence in our class yesterday. As I mentioned in my last composition, I had to meet our technician from China, so I could not attend our class. >> CORRECT! >> OR: As I mentioned in my last composition, I had to meet our technician from China, so I couldn\'t attend our class. Originally, our boss goes to fetch him by his car whenever he visits, but due to his personal schedule, he could not put his time to do that. >> Originally, our boss goes to fetch him by our boss\'s car whenever he visits, but due to my head\'s personal schedule, putting time to do that couldn\'t be possible. (Your sentence is not that clear. Some words can be identified by both people in your statement.) >> OR: Originally, our boss goes to fetch the said technician by his car whenever that person visits, but due to his personal schedule, he could not put his time to do that. Yesterday, not only I took him to his hotel, but also treat him to dinner. >> Yesterday, not only I took him to his hotel, but also treated him to dinner. (The past tense of TREAT is TREATED.) At that time, I took one of my colleagues who majored in Chinese to let him practice his Chinese with our technician. >> CORRECT! >> OR: That time, I took one of my colleagues who majored in Chinese to let him practice his Chinese with our technician. However, he did not utter a word with him during our dinner. >> CORRECT! >> OR: However, he didn\'t utter any words with him during our dinner. I just wanted to give him a chance to use Chinese, but he seemed to be very shy. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I just wanted to give him a privilege to speak Chinese, but he seemed to be very shy. Because of his passive personality, I was the only one who talks with him consistently in that situation.>> Because of his passive personality that time, I was the only one who talked with him consistently in that situation. (You made your sentence a little confusing. I don\'t really know if you wanted to state a fact or describe your time with the men you were with.) During our talks, I found myself using some words in English involuntarily when I spoke Chinese. >> CORRECT! >> OR: During our conversation, I found myself using some English words involuntarily when I spoke Chinese. I think there are two languages running in my head, and it is a little bit hard to control that perfectly. Hahaha! >> I think there are two languages running in my head, and it is a little hard for me to control them perfectly. (THAT should be THEM because of TWO LANGUAGES.) Well, it is sure to be related to practice. ^^>> CORRECT! >> OR: Well, it is sure to be related to getting used to it. By the way, I just got a message from Power English that our teachers submitted Easter eggs for a contest. >> CORRECT! Did you also make that for this contest? ^^ >> CORRECT! >> OR: Did you participate in this contest? See you this evening! >> CORRECT!