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Dear my Teacher Paula, A terrific Thursday! I think this week seems a long time to you due to your bad condition. You can just bear two days, then, you can have a good rest soon. I am also expecting for this coming weekend. There is no specific reason why I am expecting for that, but I just feel happy when I think about the weekend. I am going to catch up on sleep this weekend. I hope you can also make a good plan or take an enough rest only for yourself. See you very soon! ^^ *Essay From my opinion, advertising has become an indispensable part to companies to sell their goods. We can say that is a standard of choosing goods for people. Some of people choose their goods only based on that without a careful consideration That's why companies scramble to hold a dominant position in a TV advertisement. I think the more people are exposed to those, the more they would be fascinated to their temptation. Due to this kind of trait, sometimes, companies do a false advertising excessively to take people's attention. In addition, to make an advertisement which gives a stronger impression, companies pour a huge sum of money into that. As a result, companies sell their goods at a high price to recoup the loss of their excessive advertisements. Somehow, we seem to be controlled by companies commercially, so it makes me feel so bitter.

Dear [이름],   A totally better day for us! ^.^   I think this week is the same with the other weeks I had even though I am experiencing some difficulties in relation to my health. I am okay and great! ^^ You are right somehow. There are still two days for us to bear before enjoying our weekends. I think this is a good news. We still have a lot of time to think of wonderful things to so this coming weekend. In my case, frankly speaking, I don\'t want to plan. I will just let things happen. Hahaha! ^.^   By the way, undeniably, advertisements are really effective for companies to attract buyers. I agree with you that they also do excessive commercializing of their goods. That\'s not good. They spend more money, and to get their money back, they make their products\' prices higher. That\'s so unfair.   Anyway, that\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! >> OR: Dear Teacher Paula, A terrific Thursday!>> CORRECT! >> OR: A terrific Thursday for us! I think this week seems a long time to you due to your bad condition. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I think this week seems to be long for you due to your bad condition. You can just bear two days, then, you can have a good rest soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: You can just bear your present state for two days, then, you can have a good rest soon. I am also expecting for this coming weekend. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I can\'t wait for the things that can happen this coming weekend. There is no specific reason why I am expecting for that, but I just feel happy when I think about the weekend. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Frankly speaking, I don\'t have any special reasons to expect for that, but I just feel happy when I think of the word weekend. I am going to catch up on sleep this weekend.>> CORRECT! >> OR: I am going to catch up on some rest through sleeping this weekend. I hope you can also make a good plan or take an enough rest only for yourself. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I hope you can also make some good plans or take some sufficient rest only for yourself. See you very soon! ^^>> CORRECT! >> OR: See you after a few hours!   *Essay From my opinion, advertising has become an indispensable part to companies to sell their goods.>> CORRECT! >> OR: In my opinion, advertising has become an indispensable factor for companies to sell their goods. We can say that is a standard of choosing goods for people. >> CORRECT! >> OR: We can say that it is a standard move for people to choose or buy some products. Some of people choose their goods only based on that without a careful consideration >> Some of the people who choose their goods only base on that without any careful consideration. (You are giving a general idea. Focus on the present tense of the verbs, and don\'t forget to put a dot or period at the end of your sentences.) That\'s why companies scramble to hold a dominant position in a TV advertisement. >> CORRECT! (This sentence is good, but I don\'t get the meaning of scramble here. Sorry! T.T) >> OR: That\'s why companies compete in holding a dominant position in a TV advertisement. >> OR: That\'s why companies rumble to hold a dominant position in a TV advertisement. I think the more people are exposed to those, the more they would be fascinated to their temptation. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I think the more consumers are exposed to those, the more they will be fascinated to their temptations. Due to this kind of trait, sometimes, companies do a false advertising excessively to take people\'s attention. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Due to this kind of trait companies sometimes do some false advertising excessively to get people\'s attention. In addition, to make an advertisement which gives a stronger impression, companies pour a huge sum of money into that. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Furthermore, to make a catching advertisement which gives a stronger impression, companies pour a huge sum of money into that. As a result, companies sell their goods at a high price to recoup the loss of their excessive advertisements. >> CORRECT! >> OR: As a result, companies sell their good at an unreasonable high price to recoup their loss for excessive advertisement. Somehow, we seem to be controlled by companies commercially, so it makes me feel so bitter. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In some way, we seem to be hypnotized by companies commercially, so it makes me feel so bitter towards this issue.